Henri KröGer

Web design company site.

By Henri KröGer

   on Aug 01, 2009
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  • Joshua Pratt

    Joshua Pratt

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    I have to agree that I like the color scheme and I really like the gradient effect at the top of the design, it reminds me of the aurora borealis. The biggest problem I see is that your design doesn't seem to have very good unity. Either go with the trendy modern look or a natural look. Both have great potential. I also am not a fan of web sites where I have to scroll a lot. You may consider breaking the content into multiple pages rather than a few tall pages.

  • Pj Bell

    Pj Bell

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    The Title, color composition

    Posted on Aug 01, 2009 at 8:24 PM

    Now for me personally there is just a little too much going on this site. The color's are a tad bit loud and doesn't really make sense to me with the deer. I would simple it down to maybe 3 or 4 colors and then run those through your site accordingly. I myself enjoy a lot of diff. colors clashed together but there is a way you can go about it to give your site a more professional look.

  • Stefan Harris

    Stefan Harris

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    content?

    Posted on Aug 02, 2009 at 6:18 AM

    where is it kinda dull

  • Szymon Niemczura

    Szymon Niemczura

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    Nice and original!

    Posted on Aug 02, 2009 at 6:22 AM

    However, I'd extend the background gradient so it don't ends on dark-grey colour. Bigger font on footer will be a good idea.

    Oh, and the deer has a black outline - I'd get rid of it to make it look 100% clean vector shape.

  • Nelson Zheng

    Nelson Zheng

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    The moose...

    Posted on Aug 02, 2009 at 9:15 AM

    I don't really think those are right colours, in particular the yellow.

  • Luciano Santa Brígida

    Luciano Santa Brígida

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    Focus on the content

    Posted on Aug 02, 2009 at 9:58 AM

    Nice colors, but the content isn't very readable. The background colors distract my eyes. Perhaps envolving the content on a box would make it pop more easily.

    • Henri Kröger
      Henri Kröger commented:
      Posted: on Aug 02, 2009 at 2:44 PM

      You guys are right, this is crap. Honest feedback can be painful, but essential to accelerate the learning process. I'll start over and forget this whole concept completely.

  • Sam Mularczyk

    Sam Mularczyk

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    Readability of text and footer

    Posted on Aug 03, 2009 at 6:42 AM

    Really nice graphic style, but I agree with others - the footer doesn't really fit in

  • Julian Streete

    Julian Streete

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    The business in the left corner

    Posted on Aug 03, 2009 at 1:34 PM

    I like the color scheme, I like the silo-vector of the deer. The contrast of peaceful nature and the vectors in the left corner are kinda cool as well...

    I just think the vectors in the left corner is overkill and too much. maybe it could be lighter. Some of the arrows and lines could be taken away so it wont feel so cluttered

  • Ningoa Immdisa

    Ningoa Immdisa

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    Colorfull background.

    Posted on Aug 13, 2009 at 12:11 PM

    I would just play around with more theme/color options and you can make something very appealing. At this point I see no connection between a deer and colorful arrows and circles.

  • Anthony Recenello

    Anthony Recenello

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    header

    Posted on Aug 01, 2009 at 5:24 PM

    Web desian? that's what it looks like. aside from the background, it's not very appealing.

    let's see, you made a gradient, added wildlife pics, and some new age design on the left.

    i do enjoy the color scheme.

  • Oliver Martin

    Oliver Martin

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    Good until you go down

    Posted on Aug 01, 2009 at 7:18 PM

    The whole upper half is uber cool but the bit with the deer and the grassy footer needs changing. Doesn't fit the retro upper-left corner theme.