Chris Merrill

Example of simple layout for local service business

By Chris Merrill

   on Aug 12, 2010
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  • Richard Banfield

    Richard Banfield

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    Heading and Positioning

    Posted on Aug 12, 2010 at 12:11 PM

    Although the design is not very original it's functional and professional sound. The positioning is not clear to me. The heading could be made simpler and stronger. For example, "We renovate homes in Bedford, MA and surrounding areas"

  • Syneace Beard

    Syneace Beard

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    Page Flow

    Posted on Aug 12, 2010 at 12:14 PM

    The page does not flow as one site. It comes across as two totally different sites. There is no connection other than the colors connecting the top to the bottom.

    • The Greens - It appears the green in the logo is slightly different color than the one in "Call us" and the bullets. The greens should match. The green for "Click" should be a darker shade of the green in the logo.
    • The Blue Border/Footer - I would try out taking the blue up the sides in the white area. Keep your pic and logo area in white.
    • Image - When you click on the image it brings up another window that is almost the same size as the one on the page. It's not necessary unless it will be a close up of something cropped out of the original image.
    • Fonts - I see at least four different fonts - Logo Font, "Call Us" Font, the "Quality Home" Font and the "Check out" Font. Limit the use of your fonts to no more 2 different styles.
  • Marwen Jegham

    Marwen Jegham

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    Draft

    Posted on Aug 12, 2010 at 6:18 PM

    Hi Chris,

    A simple targeted website, i understood the purpose easily. Althoug i would use lesser text in the banner and it is repeating itself, you can simplify it.

    I like the 'Call us' section the positionnig is good the call to action as well but the question Need an estimate? should have another answer than 'click to ask a question' maybe you can use 'Request a quote'.

    For the check our work you might combine it with testimonials, while it is the work the company did, it will be better to see there the customer testimonial, it is more engagent.

    Good luck

  • Steven Johnson

    Steven Johnson

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    Needs something extra...

    Posted on Aug 13, 2010 at 3:31 AM

    Hi Chris,

    Good first draft, everything is easy to understand once you've read it and I know exactly what the company is all about.

    However, it does need that 'something extra' to make it stand out from their competitors.

    Here's my suggestions:

    1. The call to action is good. The 'Guaranteed same day return call', does that mean that I won't be able to speak to someone if I phone and it would just be an answering machine? Agree with the other guy about changing the bottom text to 'Request A Quote'. I would also make this button bigger than the 'Need an Estimate?' text as that is going to be the actual call to action.
    2. The telephone number at the top looks out of place because it's so small and on its own. It makes me want to take it home and mother it. I would make it bigger or drop it.
    3. You seem to have two main headings going on here, I prefer the one to the left. But make it a touch bigger.
    4. Why are there pictures of landscapes and dogs? The only picture worth putting on there at the moment is the kitchen image. Users might not understand on how to switch pictures using the circle icons. Either make it happen automatically or put arrows labelled 'next' on the images.
    5. I would have a subtle gradient as the background on the bottom section so it breaks up the solid colour.
    6. The testimonial box. I would put some stylish quote marks on the top left and bottom right. Maybe change the background colour to a lighter shade of blue aswell.
    7. I would drop the 'We love our clients' text and arrow.
    8. Do they have any industry creditation? If so, display the logos somewhere.
    9. I might be tempted to move the 'Services' section to the top and put the examples of work below.

    That's all I can think of for now.

    Hope something helps,

    Steve

  • Ravi Kumar V.

    Ravi Kumar V.

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    Not Bad

    Posted on Aug 13, 2010 at 3:47 AM

    hi,

    I think you started well when designing this site. But I could see some lack of inspiration with header and footer...It sounds me you submitted in a hurry. Thats why its not looking 100% finished. Nice work

  • Daniel White

    Daniel White

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    Layout

    Posted on Aug 13, 2010 at 10:53 AM

    It's clean, I'll give you that.

    Not terrible, but uninspired.

    You are using modern colors and graphics, but the implementation isn't the best.

    Structure, Alignment, Font-size, and overall feel need work.

  • Charlie Kierzkowski

    Charlie Kierzkowski

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    Add "hard to notice" Gradients

    Posted on Aug 14, 2010 at 5:55 AM

    Hello There!

    1. Try to add a little bit depth to this design, my suggestions would be.. adding GRADIENT white-black for example in the "white area" then changing opacity of this gradient to 5% it would look a lot mroe professional and will have more depth
    2. In blue section, try to do the same white-black with oppacity of 10% for example + color burn or other blending that you might see looks better but try to do not use more then 10% of gradient! and.. it should look better.
    3. Also it is good practive when your designing a website and you have some text would be rendered as text in browser for example like "what our clients are saying" try to make the text to have font-antialiasing set to "none"
    4. Try to make footer to be similiar as the toplogo section widelong stripe with height of 50-75 pixels maybe ? with small gradient on it just to give a feel of depth

    I hope it was helpful..