Hi Steven,
You've got some good potential going on. I think my main concern is that you've tackled many of the aspects as if they were an individual & standalone design, not tying them to each other, the big thing you need here is consistency. Some comments:
I think you're on the right track, just need to unite everything!
Best of luck & keep us posted..
Cheers
Noel
HI Steve,
I'd go with an overall dark theme, if you choose to keep both, be strict about keeping dark to header/nav/footer and leaving the rest white.
Call to action in the form of drop downs to bring you right to the car's specific product.
With the blocks, I'd integrate the ones on the right into a larger product spotlight (including those dropdowns to get to that right product)
Good luck :)
Cheers
Noel
Hi Steven,
Again a good base to build upon. I think the main challenge is to help the user understand where he is and what he's looking at, and do it fast. Disclaimer: I'm not into car tuning, so perhaps I'm missing something that's obvious to your
It took me some 30 seconds to understand what this page is about. At first I thought it was selling computer parts (because of the look and the photo of the electronics part). There's no photo of a car or engine to visually help me understand the product. The "free waterproof sleeve" makes me even more confused. What's this sleeve for?
It seems like you are primarily selling one, main product. Is that correct? What's the name of the product? I think that I would make the homepage very focused on selling the diesel tuning system. Maybe get inspired by iphone app sites. You'd have one, clear call-to-action: get people to the product description page.
The digital microprocessor part is actually pretty cool - I can see why/how this could help boost sales. But the image isn't well integrated, it doesn't help sell. How does knowing that there's a digital microprocessor in your gadget add value to the product? Spell it out to the visitor.
In general on this page, think about where you want the visitor to click. What do you want him to do? As a visitor I would feel the need for a bit more guidance.
You are right that there is very little text. The text that's there looks like it's hardcoded on the image. From an SEO perspective this is a big problem, but from a sales/usability perspective the page is not bad. I'd add a text section which:
The visa image in the footer is good. Do you have any more credibility indicators that you could add? Is your company certified in some way? Do you (or whoever's the owner) personally have a relevant certification? Your product improves energy consumption - is there some sort of green seal you could use?
The phone number in the header is good. Shows we are dealing with a "real" business with humans behind it. Consider putting the address in the footer for the same reason.
I'm guessing your target market is younger men who want their car to go faster. Probably these guys are feature driven - for this reason your percentages ("35% more power" etc.) work well. But think about how to take this further. Do you have a case study about a car which was boosted from X horsepower to XXX horsepower? Maybe have a little "featured client" photo, with a happy guy with beefed up car and a big number like "40% increase in horsepower". Preferably with a nice quote about how much the guy loves your product.
Small detail: in the header it says "Log in or register". I'd leave out the "or register" part. Let them find out later (but ideally they shouldn't be forced to register at all!).
I hope that was helpful.
Kind regards, Jens
Hi Jens,
Thanks for your review again.
Not really much to comment on this as it's all pretty self explanatory! I'll get to work on some things you've suggested.
Thanks,
Steve
Not having a call to action is going to severely hold back the sales figures. There is a lot of sales type promotion of the product on the page but no logical way for the user to continue.
The home page gives no strong indication that this is even an e-commerce website. It looks more like a website of a distributor who is using their website to showroom their products. The only indication that the website has e-commerce capabilities is the visa icon in the bottom left corner. If that icon was not there, just by looking at the home page most people would think that you cannot buy anything on this site.
The main content panel you have on the left with the promo text "35% more power" etc has a lot of real estate which can be put to great use with some typical e-commerce elements. For example, "Latest products" with 2-3 products side by side with an add to cart button for each could be a way of pushing through the e-commerce aspect of the site. "The 35% more power,torque,economy" could potentially be placed on the image below.
Hi Kristian,
Many thanks for your comments.
I totally get your idea of making it look more like an ecommerce website, but as there's only 1 product, I won't be able to do the latest products or an add to cart button, as this 1 product has about 1000 different vehicle options and the user needs to select their vehicle before purchasing.
I'm trying to think of a decent call to action, the only ones I can think of are:
Good ideas though and I'll hopefully implement some.
Cheers,
Steve
You don't need to add "by clicking here" on the buttons. It is commonly accepted that clicking on a button will do whatever the button's label suggests. A button's label should really summarize the action that the will happen when you click on the button. it is not a place to try to be a salesman.
The users will click on the button AFTER the text on/graphics on the page have already enticed them to proceed to the next step. The next logical step may be to seek more information or to go ahead with a purchase. In which case the appropriate actions the users would want to make would be a) add to cart/buy or b)more info. Your website would need to cater for these actions and it would need to do it in a way that is obvious to the user/customer.
You do not necessarily need a cliche "add to cart" button, you just need to make it obvious how the user should proceed to the next step as well as making it very clear that this website allows them to make purchases.
First thing I noticed on the design before I even got past the top black bar was that your logo has different padding compared to the phone/delivery sections on the top right, bring down the logo to the same level.
Your menu needs work, currently I see 2 buttons on your website and the word home slapped on the top left, look to do more with this.
Your call to action is well missing, you have some well designed adverts etc on the design, yet nothing to make people click on them.
Your main banner on the left under the menu, why does that have the large whitespace? Looks like it needs finished. This section should be the part that draws the eye the most but at the moment its the part you look at last.
Your footer, why all the large empty space? Why not make those 3 menu lists go horizontally rather than vertical, it might help you get rid of this uneven whitespace you have there.
Its a good start, but you have a good bit left to do to make this the finished article. Looking forward to seeing the next revision.
Hi Alan,
Thanks for your comments.
Main nav alignment - Good call.
Not sure how I can improvement the menu, as there's only two buttons I need really.
The home link in the top left is the breadcrumbs, I guess it doesn't really show that on the homepage.
Interesting idea re the footer. Do users expect a vertical footer? Would a horizontal footer be less easy to understand? I know that if I have one horizontal footer it would be easy, but as I've got three sections, could it get confusing?
Again, thanks for your comments,
Steve
I like the Colors, the header is perfect. Menu is good too.
i would prefer if the you put a slide images under the menu that stretch in one column instead of 2.
Then under the slide images i put a call to action button that stretch all the way with Buy now For Free UK Delivery.
Then under the call to action button i would put 2 columns, the large one will have an intro text and the small one will have the small banners.
The the footer i will put Social Media buttons like facebook, Twitter, Youtube. + Credit card buttons you should put Master Cards, Discover or American Express beside Visa.
Hi Noel,
Thanks for your comments.
Just a follow up if I could:
So you would suggest a dark background for the non-important details and use the brighter green for the main content and call to action?
Not sure what call to action I could use, the users need to go into the nav to get to their product, so they can't buy direct from the homepage. Or do you mean something like 'Buy now by finding your vehicle' or similar?
Would you keep the same size blocks or lay it out differently?
Yep, at the moment it's on all graphics, ideally I'll be using background images and text over the top so it's still readable by SE's.
Again, yep, having trouble trying to think out decent headers names, I'll keep thinking!
Thanks again, I'm sure I'll be able to make some improvements based on your review.
Cheers,
Steve