Fineline Furniture

I think this is a good start Dan, what engine do you plan on using on the backend?

Here are some of my comments:

• I'd create another bar above the fold to hold your "Your Basket" & "Checkout" buttons, maybe throw in the phone number right next to them (on the same bar).
• I only noticed the dark green of the logo when I got on a product page, did you want integrate it more?
• How is someone going to scroll through products within a category, jquery slider?
• Social Media buttons are slightly 9-5, maybe align them to the design?
• Spacing between characters is a little wild at parts, i.e. phone number bottom right.

Otherwise I like the site, push the call to actions a little more and good luck!

Cheers

Noel

I really think this is great. I like monochromatic schemes with colorful content. In my opinion, it is one of the best ways to build an attractive layout without it distracting from the presentation.

There is one thing that is driving me crazy about this design though; the grey vertical space above your large photo to the right of the logo... Would it be possible to incorporate the logo into the menu bar and inverse it into a warm grey or faint green or perhaps even a faint gradient of both?

Typography looks great, although the overlying text in the photo is bold, but doesn't appear bold to me because it's all bold. How about trying to un-bold everything except "Premium"?

The picture looks good. I do not get the feral of an furniture.

Very clean nice design but I feel there is too much non active space in the header..

Looks like a good start and I feel you are very much in the middle of things. I like the fonts and the typography and the subtle colors used.

A few pointers on first look: On branding: I think the logo colors can be utilized in some form On Design Elements:

1. Header space is a little wasted.
2. Alignment of objects is a little mismatched.
3. Shopping basket can have some more details, check out amazon or ebay for some very neat and usable ideas
4. The primary and the secondary navigation is way apart to make relation between them

On interaction: As suggested by Noel some kind of carousel can be very neat for representation however a simple approach of pagenation would help too. But the in place bigger view of the items can really help the users without needing to go to the details page. I think they need to go there when they are convinced and need to buy for sure.

Hope this helps you to move ahead :)

Hi Dan, Its a real nice and clean design you have there. The only thing I would like to suggest is the distance between categories and the address is too much. You can add something as a filler of the gap. Otherwise its a good design

Dan,

I am liking this. There are three points that came to my mind. 1. The space on the right hand side of the logo. One way out is, you can implement the my account, cart, logout links there on the right hand side. One by one, vertically. It will give you a closed and balanced look for the top portion. 2. Now the main image. Don't you think the label is blocking a good part of the image? I would rather try the label at bottom, something like the attached image, so that there will be no visual barrier. 3. Use bred crumb, it will be easy for the user to know where actually they are.

-Aneesh

Hey this is not a great start really needs a lot of work.

Homepage

• The nav is way to much to the right and needs some style to it. The text looks like (times) don't be scared to use colors.
• the logo space is way to much for the top and bottom. I would use an image for the for size of the background and design on top of it. just to give the look of a showroom.
• footer need a lot of work way to boring need alot of style and a better font.

The inner pages

• this looks a little better but also needs work. its best if you go look around the web for cool furniture store website.

I think you hit the nail on the head with this one, it definitely portrays a clean look.

I do think there is far too much white space next to the logo and below the top menu. Perhaps you could extend the main image right to the top with a slightly transparent box behind the logo which would match the one used in the main image?

Otherwise not much I would change, it does look good.