Hey Dan, This is really starting to look good! A big improvement from earlier I think, hopefully you agree as well. I really like the change in the background as well as the header background graphic. Nice job!
I took a look at the site and have a few more suggestions, but it's really beginning to come along quite well.
Well things are really looking good. Hopefully these little tidbits help again! Looking good.
You really really either need to reproduce that logo (trace it) in vector, or get the company to supply you with a proper one.
If neither is possible:
- invert the logo layer in photoshop, making the background black
- go to the channels panel
- ctrl click the thumbnail for the graphic... this will PROPERLY select the logo contents.
The magic wand is not the appropriate tool to extract a logo from a white background. If you can't do any of the above, at least add an outer glow, or put it inside a white background.
I like the texture, and the strap... although it could possibly be positioned a bit better.
The logo was incoming. I just received the file. What do you mean strap?
Thanks for the review.
Hi Dan,
I would suggest adding some graphics to the page background - maybe even in a graffiti style, or a 'splash' style.
For example see;
http://www.istockphoto.com/stock-illustration-9221265-grunge-elements.php
http://www.istockphoto.com/stock-illustration-11992294-graffiti-background.php
Adding these sorts of elements will create interest and attract your target audience.
Good luck,
Ross
Textiness.
This site is supposed to appeal to restless male teenagers. Howabout some photos? Graphics? You have the advantage of actually selling something that can be seen and touched, so why not give it to the visitors? Right now this site looks more like a blog than like the front end of a sports equipment store. Make it a little more exciting for those video and photo-driven teenage junkies !!
Couldn't put it better. Great improvement too, just need some small changes.