Basit Chughtai

Maha Taibah Logo

By Basit Chughtai

   on Jul 24, 2010
4 Reviews1 Vote0 Favorites781 Views

Concept Reviews

  • Ionut Resetar

    Ionut Resetar

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    • Design: 4
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    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    needs some work

    Posted on Jul 24, 2010 at 3:31 AM

    very nice concept, I think you can present this concept, but before you do that:

    drop the shadow.

    And VERY IMPORTANT, make the round areas round, you don't have a nice round logo, it is cornered every where ...

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    • Basit Chughtai
      Basit Chughtai commented:
      Posted: on Jul 24, 2010 at 6:04 AM

      Hey thanks for your Review Ionut, but these corners must be there, because a wide chisel Tip pen is used to write Arabic, so it makes these Corners. And Logo is Reflecting Arabic more than English. :)

    • Ionut Resetar
      Ionut Resetar commented:
      Posted: on Jul 24, 2010 at 3:03 PM

      aha ... I understand, well just take the shadow out then :).

    • Michael Gunner
      Michael Gunner commented:
      Posted: on Jul 24, 2010 at 5:50 PM

      I think it's difficult, most users of this site are Westerners and we have no understanding of Arabic, so it's difficult for us to review this! It looks good to me though :)

    • Basit Chughtai
      Basit Chughtai commented:
      Posted: on Jul 26, 2010 at 3:24 AM

      Im really sorry, however Thanks for your review =]

  • Rick Battle

    Rick Battle

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    • Design: 5
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    change how the 'K' and 't' interact

    Posted on Jul 26, 2010 at 10:25 AM

    i have to agree with the previous review over the corners in the big icon, but as previously stated, they're necessary, so leave them; however, leave the shadow. i think it's great the way it is. it adds depth.

    my only complaint is where the 'K' hits the 't'. maybe move the "taibah" to the right and shift the all three names up to better match the slope of the thick part near it ... very very minor.

    overall, excellent work.

  • Stephanie Smith

    Stephanie Smith

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    The font

    Posted on Jul 26, 2010 at 1:13 PM

    I love the logo mark itself. Very elegant. The font for her name, however, is not as good. I would look for a classic serif font. That way it will be timeless, and will add a touch of traditional to the modern logo. I'm also assuming that since she's a billionaire that she is somewhat of a conservative and/or deals with lots of conservative-type people. That would lead me to go with a more traditional serif font as well.

    Good job!

    • Basit Chughtai
      Basit Chughtai commented:
      Posted: on Jul 27, 2010 at 5:06 AM

      Hi Stephanie! Thanks for your Sugessions about Font. Reallly found it Helpful

  • Jackie Villegas

    Jackie Villegas

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    Logo

    Posted on Aug 03, 2010 at 11:11 PM

    I think the logo should have some kind of interaction with the rest of the page. It very isolated from the rest. The type dosen't look like it works very well with the logo itself.

    Check this website out and look for arabic logos.http://logopond.com/search/ http://logoblink.com/2008/03/29/arabic-logos/