Hello Mr Miracle!
This is a decent start, but there are a few issues which stop me from giving the logo a better star rating.
well I will not add a review because after reading this one, I realize I have no idea what to say, didn't notice any of the problems Michael did, except that I didn't get what the gr is for, you could improve that by adding the dot next to the gr so it will be ".gr".
I think the gr was confusing and although it's regional so not necessarily a problem...who knows who will be accessing your website, certainly nothing wrong with broadening your appeal :)
I agree with most of Gunner's comments. The 2 biggest distractors that I see in this design is the lack of space within each letter (eg, there is hardly any white space under the top of the a and in the middle of the a; the dot on the i is too close to it's stem), and the colors. You should definitely select a thinner font that is more legible, and also tighten up the get a life tag.
As for the colors, I don't have a problem with the magenta-ish that you have chosen, but it is a bold color that is conflicting for dominance with the dark gray quotes. I'd either scale down the quotes so the socialhood text stands out more, or choose a lighter gray so they aren't so dominant.
I'd also arrange the right quote so that the gr bottom aligns with the bottom of social hood text to imply that it's all part of the domain.
Andy,
Thank you for your review. I get your point, both you and Michael's above, i will arrange it...
I will try your opinion about the colors..
As for the .gr i put there so its on the middle of the right quotation mark
nice and clean very smart
How in the world did someone find this "review" helpful? maybe it was some weird mouse spazm and they missed the "report abuse" button.
I have to agree with Gunner's comments...
Overall I think this has potential, but that font is so dodgy that readability is absolutely shocking!
I have added a quick mock up, where I have made the "o" in social a cheeky smile... hopefully this will help with the tongue in cheek tagline...
Good Luck!
I don't know why but those apostrophe's are just killing it for me. I really do like this design a whole lot. To me a different symbol or something would work better than apostraphe's.
the l and the h could get blended if logo is too small. I like Get a Life!
Well - What I liked - I like the way you used these both colors and got a good combination Then I liked the font you used for "Get a life 2.0" What I would like to change - The font for social hood is way too bold.
Overall - Really good work :)
I like the colors but would like to see a more stylized or interacting element. A social / communication related object. I agree no gr inside the comma.
one change I would recommend is to unbold the text.
logo is good for start but need to be improved
I like your logo, just couple things,
It looks like you used a stroke around the font to make it bolder, get rid of it, it's creating a little mess
I don't think is necessary the "gr" inside the quotation mark, this is a "comma", it is not a "dot", doesn't make sense if you are talking about the website address, keep it clean,
I would suggest use lower case over the tag line
good work Mr.
It's not too often that I see a concept on this site that I really love. This is one of those concepts. :)
I like the colour combination. It stands out with enough contrast, yet still blends together. I also like the bold font because it flows well with the quotation marks.
The only thing that I found odd was the gr. I understand that this is part of the url, but it seems out of place there. Personally, I'd like the logo better if it wasn't there -- although it's no big issue.
To be honest, I wouldn't do much in the way of shadowing. Sometimes simple is better. Shadows and such may over-complicate a good thing. :)
Overall, I'm impressed. Good job!
Dear Sarah,
You are so generous. Its happy for me who has no experience to have pep talk from a professional like you. The .gr is part of the domain, it's a greek domain, the target group (greeks) gonna get it immediately.
That makes sense. I guess if it had been a ca instead of gr I might not have thought it seemed so out of place. So yes, I can understand your point about how the target group would get it. :)
Glad I can be of some help!
i love it ! good design and nice color scheme ! great job !
I like the colors but would like to see a more stylized or interacting element. A social / communication related object. I agree no gr inside the comma.
Michael!
Thank you very much for you comment..
Maybe you are right. Actually i was looking for a simple bold font. This font was bold by its own, i didnt do anything... I saw the ends at the S and yes if you pay attention i dont like it either.. I will try to find another one, but overall i want it to by this kind of boldness and plumpy :)...
As far as the backround.. I know, i have seen it in other designs and i made it quickly, in fact it looks better and of course this backround its not gonna be in the site... I will have a simple clean white backround.. Would you have any other idea?
The .gr thing guys is part of the web address... It's a greek site so .gr is the greek domain... www.socialhood.gr... I want it to be there, the targe it's gonna be Greek people, so i dont think there gonna be any confusion.
The tag it is ironically, thank got it... Well i like the capital because the "Socialhood" above is with lowercase, that's why there is this contradiction... What do you mean by cheeky font? Like handrwritten? Yes but then it has to be lowercase like "Socialhood" i dont know if it's gonna fit anyway...
Thanks again for your criticism, i really look forward for your further comments :)