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Hey I like the cloud it's wel done. But the text in it, is really not fitting wel also the font you used doesn't really seem to fit wel. Why not try making the cloud smaller and plate the text under the cloud?
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I like the concept here. The way you layered the cloud design is unique and kind of fun. In my opinion, it's not too unprofessional.
My biggest issue is with the actual text. It somehow doesn't tie in with the cloud. Just sort of sits in the middle, looking separate. What about adding a background colour and then having the letters in white, looking like they are a hole in the cloud? On the white background, it gives the illusion that the cloud is simple an outline, rather than one whole piece.
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Is this B2B? then is fine. If its for consumers not sure i get the message. The logo itself is nice.
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Chance Hoffman commented:Yes it is B2B and it's 1 software component out of a suite, still work to do. thanks
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As Gijs Scholman maintained, your should first of all place the "cloud" offside of the typography.
Then i would try to make something that connects whit the word "traveling". Perhaps a plane?
At the moment when i look at the logotype i only see some kind of vector design website and not the topic it should relate to.
this is better i believe.