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Ezequeil
Do want this to actually go on a magazine header? You should know better than that!
Anyway, dude what to say, I like it but it'll never work as a mast head it's too busy!
Maybe you could align all the letters on the base, and then it will probably work, if you want it on a magazine mock it up on one!
Overall the name is cool, I do like the logo, I think it might be a bit too busy…
Good Luck!
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Luke Marohn commented:I see where you are going with this Ezequiel, Its kind of an abstract "logo". I would space out the letters a bit, because honestly, Its a pain in the ass to read.
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I like it! Its funky and arty - I guess thats the purpose, but could do with some colour this would really make it pop!
Somehow the thicker lines on the a and the T are bugging me as they seem to stand out lots from the other letters but overall its cool!
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Well, typographically, I think there are just too many font faces on the logo. And some are thick and some are too thin (like the letter "e"), this will be an issue with the logo's versatility. For example if you would scale this down to let's say 1 inch width or so, those thin letters wont be that noticeable compared to the other thick letters and it could be a readability issue. Also, I think the diffrent fonttypes doesn't really go in harmony with each other. Perhaps I would suggest to make the logo simplier by having just 2 fonts max. maybe 1 font for "arte" and one for the "monia"? you get the idea... Making the logo as simple as possible will make it more verstatile, memomarable, and effective.
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Its alright - not very inviting! Or may be the lack of colors in this version makes it look so. But like your concept, if it exactly represents Arte Asmonia - it seems well thought. But designwise, I would look for some more ...
Hey Araan, my man. Thanks a lot for the feedback, really appreacite it. Do you really think to align the letters? Won't be come a little too boring? Maybe I'm wrong but the idea was to go for an edgy concept. Anyway, I will keep your feedback for now and wait to see for some others. If they all agree with you, then I'll have to find another idea. Many thanks!