David27

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By David27

   on Jul 03, 2010
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Concept Reviews

  • Nick Glavin

    Nick Glavin

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    980

    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
    2 Votes
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    The way you review other peoples work

    Posted on Jul 03, 2010 at 9:09 PM

    Weak...

    however i will give you a couple of pointers

    Courier could possibly be the ugliest font in the world... try not to use it

    Headings look more like buttons and buttons look like tables

    Headings also don't align with body text

    Good Luck...

  • Maxime Alexandre Trudel

    Maxime Alexandre Trudel

    Rank: 4 Master

    281

    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
    1 Vote
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    Too much stuff need to be changed

    Posted on Jul 03, 2010 at 5:37 PM

    First, I must say that I'm really surprise. In my personal opinion ther is much to say about it.

    First of all you should clear the background. Also change the typo. And resize the line in the menu to be smaller.

    After align the text at left but not centered ( exept in the typo)

    I don't understand the captain...

  • Patrick Niebrzydowski

    Patrick Niebrzydowski

    Rank: 2 Titan

    4613

    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
    0 Votes
    start over, or have someone else do it

    Posted on Jul 03, 2010 at 6:43 PM

    Layout, alignment, typography, imagery. Pretty much everything is lacking. You're lacking just about every basic design principle there is. Maybe that is why your reviews have yet to contain more than one word.

    My best suggestion is to either go all the way back to the start and read a bit on basic design principles, then try again.

    I might have been able to score you higher on purpose, but unfortunately I don't particularly know what that is.

  • Joao Martins

    Joao Martins

    Rank: 10 Newbie

    3

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    A secção do menu

    Posted on Jul 05, 2010 at 3:25 PM

    É minimalista mas como já disseram e acho que é o ponto principal, o menu parece que não tem botões.

  • MoreThanModa

    MoreThanModa

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
    0 Votes
    Draft

    Posted on Jul 05, 2010 at 4:22 PM

    like muito

  • Ben Hewitt

    Ben Hewitt

    Rank: 2 Titan

    648

    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
    0 Votes
    Draft

    Posted on Jul 08, 2010 at 11:47 AM

    There is a lot to say about this, Im not sure where to start but the font, header, links, and layout - pretty much everything needs attention

    It looks more of a mockup than a design but then this is 'concept' feedback.

    Maybe you should have a look around at some sites with a similar purpose or aim as to what you are trying to achieve - it might inspire you to build on what you have here