Nishant Patil

ForgotDebts.net

By Nishant Patil

   on Jul 01, 2010
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  • Andy E

    Andy E

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    competing areas of focus

    Posted on Jul 01, 2010 at 10:22 AM

    This is a good start, but there are multiple focal points fighting for dominance. At the least, I'd change the 'get out of debt' heading into plain text and place it under the logo. This would allow the visitor to immediately see what the site is for.

    What's in the video? Modify this heading to something more descriptive so the user knows what's in it.

    I'd add more information around the free consultation so they know what they would be signing up for. What is in the consultation?

    • Nishant Patil
      Nishant Patil commented:
      Posted: on Jul 01, 2010 at 1:32 PM

      Thanks for your feedback I will implement your feedback in my design. Thanks again.

  • jorge nascimento

    jorge nascimento

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

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    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
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    Draft

    Posted on Jul 02, 2010 at 1:19 PM

    I like the harmony of the site