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There is A LOT of text. Most of the copy is the same size. You need more hierarchy. Remember people today have the attention span of goldfish nobody's gonna read all that text unless you make it easy. Maybe tabs so the different country stuff is separated, giving you less to look at. Also its's very colorful and the handwritten text gives a ver childish feel, If you want older men to consider this i would suggest getting rid of the pink, and pick a serious typeface
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Ovi Hentea commented:I'd say Analise has a valid point about the length of body paragraphs. True, they do read verbose news articles online, but when you're trying to sell/present a product, you cannot afford the luxury of ongoing descriptive text. My vote goes for a list of features at the top of the page linked to the section that gives further detail.
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Ovi Hentea commented:
I'd say Analise has a valid point about the length of body paragraphs. True, they do read verbose news articles online, but when you're trying to sell/present a product, you cannot afford the luxury of ongoing descriptive text. My vote goes for a list of features at the top of the page linked to the section that gives further detail.
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Hey Analise, thanks for reviewing my concept! Well about the text - I really can't tell, I mean: people read long articles on news sites too. The amount is also needed for search engines to love me ;-) But I completely agree on the other point you mentioned about the typefaces and the general colourfulness of it - there's no good fit between the top (image) and the bottom (content) section, I realize now I need to rework the top sections. Greetz, Chris