Christoph Brueckner

website design for puaworld.org

By Christoph Brueckner

   on Jul 29, 2009
2 Reviews1 Vote0 Favorites357 Views

Concept Reviews

  • Rachel Nelson

    Rachel Nelson

    Rank: 3 Superior

    167

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    I would left-align your titles

    Posted on Aug 10, 2009 at 5:41 AM

    This is a nice clean layout not too cluttered. Only thing I would say is that for your target audience it looks a little girly.

    • Christoph Brueckner
      Christoph Brueckner commented:
      Posted: on Aug 10, 2009 at 6:27 AM

      Hi Rachel, thanks for reviewing. I wouldn't say girlish, but yeah, it is cartoonish and that may not suit the target audience, you're right.

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  • dkbizconsulting

    dkbizconsulting

    Rank: 10 Newbie

    13

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
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    Id make it have a more manly theme. get rid of the font on the right boxes - too girly

    Posted on Aug 14, 2009 at 9:36 AM

    I agree with the other reviewer, it seems like a woman's site. I like the cleanness of everything, the all white background, and the reflection from the logo. I think the italic type on the right looks exactly how my girlfriend writes. Overall, I think it is good, just need to watch some axe commercials for a bit more inspiration.

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