Avril Verhaeghen

Clean Simple Blog Theme

By Avril Verhaeghen

   on Jun 24, 2010
4 Reviews1 Vote0 Favorites493 Views

Concept Reviews

  • Tobias

    Tobias

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    Good as a template

    Posted on Jun 28, 2010 at 4:09 AM

    This already looks like its going to be popular.. What I like + nice photo shot + nice twitter section + nice buttons and date display (I assume the date display is dynamic) + seems quite expandable with good styling for the sidebar and footer

    What might be improved - The menu in the header seems completely lost. Hard to find, hard to understand, out of place - also the text area placement in the header I dont like so much - For me there's still quite a big difference from the body and the header design - The body design appears to be of an more elegant site with that century-gothic like font, almost minimalistic design with only one color used - The header logo has a very bold font which together with the background looks more like a construction company's site to me; Also the black areas as well as the thumbnail placement make it confusing and not elegant at all - Maybe there is also a little too less contrast between the sidebar and the main content, it all looks the same so confusing. However because everything is nicely lined up that is still ok

    • Avril Verhaeghen
      Avril Verhaeghen commented:
      Posted: on Jun 28, 2010 at 4:41 AM

      Hey Tobias,

      Thanks for the review this is very usefull, didn't see those things :P I'll try to do something to the sidebar, but for the moment I don't have an idea :P

      Thanks anyway!

  • Chance Hoffman

    Chance Hoffman

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    1 Vote
    Navigation and body appearence

    Posted on Jun 24, 2010 at 5:22 PM

    Strong header shot, although I think the navigation gets swallowed up by it. The body of the blog doesn't seem to compliment the header graphic at all. It seems very two-tone Web 2.0 where the header is very vibrant and old world-like. At the very least I would try to match the blue elements to the same shade blue in the sky and try to implement some of the gold hues from the building into the body as well. The body shouldn't compete with the header, but try to make it part of the same composition.

    • Avril Verhaeghen
      Avril Verhaeghen commented:
      Posted: on Jun 28, 2010 at 4:42 AM

      Hey Chance,

      Thanks for the comments, like the other guys I guess that the header section isn't the greatest part. I'll go try make it better :)

      Thanks!

  • Jacob

    Jacob

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    1 Vote
    Looks great, but the nav needs work

    Posted on Jun 27, 2010 at 5:14 PM

    Nice work. I really like it. It's clean, organized, functional. I like the treatment with the post dates. Very nice touch. I would like to see how you go about coding it for WP, as this is usually the make or break deal for most themes.

    My only critique is that the navigation isn't very functional. It's rare that you find vertical main-navigation these days. This one, in my opinion, is too small and disconnected from the content. maybe try a thin bar under the header image for a horizontal style nav.

    • Avril Verhaeghen
      Avril Verhaeghen commented:
      Posted: on Jun 28, 2010 at 4:40 AM

      Hey Jacob,

      Thanks, I was also thinking that the navigation menu was misplaced, but wasn't sure enough. I would like to make a template with an navigation section that we don't see often, so I'm going to keep it vertical.

      Maybe I can make the featured section with the foto's a bit smaller and pull the content and navigation a bit together.

      Hope that it will be better then :)

  • Pushpander Singh

    Pushpander Singh

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    0 Votes
    Draft

    Posted on Nov 20, 2011 at 3:03 AM

    A very nice and unique design of the header