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Website Redesign for St. Charles MO Library District

By Frank Noto

   on Jun 09, 2010
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  • Joe Karayusuf

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    Search Drop Down

    Posted on Jun 09, 2010 at 7:31 PM

    Homepage: 1.) Lose the drop down menu for search.
    Such a menu only hinders the user experience and complicates the programming of the search. If you want to allow the user to refine the search, provide refinements selection after the original search has been made. Steve Kruug covered this topic in his book "Don't Make me Think".

    I would recommend just expanding the search bar to fill the area gained from removing the category selector.

    2.) Make a clear call to action It seems the goal of the homepage is to get people to sign up for the summer reading program, however the link "Find out more!" is the same color as the text and barely noticeable.

    3.) Change FEATURE to FEATURES The blue banner should say features as there are more than one.

    4.) Government Documents should ling up with "Whats New" The government documents section is around 10 pixels above the whats new section. These two should line up.

    Branches and Hours I think you've done a great job with this page. The page navigation is easy to understand.

    eBooks etc... 1.) You can get rid of most of the text on this page. Chances are people are not going to read it as they just want to get to the ebooks and audio books. I'd recommend just placing two images side by side stating "eBooks" and "Audio Books" with an appropriate graphic. For example a pdf icon for eBooks and headphones for audio. Users will know exactly what to do.

    2.) The empty side navigation area looks odd. You could create sections for eBooks and Audio books similar to the navigation structure of the Branches page. Under these sections you could provide basic "how tos". Example: (The below links are not great, but could provide a decent starting point.)

    eBooks Downloads Get Adobe Reader Restrictions How it works

    For Teens 1.) Change the font of the banner. I like the notebook scribble look you achieved with the side navigation, but it doesn't fit on the banner. It makes the teens site look like its for younger kids and may be discouraging. Update the banner with text more suitable for teens.

    2.) Remote the second "for teens" You've done a great job of informing the user what page he/she is on with the large purple FOR TEENS section. You don't need to repeat it again om the body.

    3.) Join the make waves logo and the make waves text The logo and the text of the Make waves at your library are not united and look like two different sections. Unify these by giving them the same background color.

    All in all the site seems really good so far. Just needs some more work.

  • Haider Ali

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    Amazingly beautiful, stupendous and fantastic!

    Posted on Jun 11, 2010 at 5:27 AM

    Amazingly beautiful, stupendous and fantastic!

    Frank this is as good as it could be and I am really enjoying the each page of this website. Book and typo spattering out of the books looks very nice. I am sure user’s landing on the website can easily figure out the objective of website and will fall love with the creative of this website and usability of course.

    Use of multicolor make this website more live, however, I think if you try to use a subtle tone of purple, green and blue then I think it will become more rocking.

    Once again great work Frank.

    Thanks, Haider

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      • 1Search button

        You are using the logo symbol for each call of action which is somehow affecting the uniqueness of the logo so I think you can use some other nice bullets for this

      • 2White spacing

        White spacing could be use more nicely... here try to move the search bar a bit of so it can centered aligned with the search bar backdrop. Same issue I can see in the what's new section as well

      • 3increase the white space

        increase the white space between the logo and navigation

      • 4Change round corner to sharp

        I think "for kid" and "for teens" buttons looks a bit different from the rest of shapes you have used in your design so I think If you make the backdrop shape pointing to bottom (similar to feature section) then it might look better as round corner looks a bit odd here and don't show consistency with the rest of design elements.

      • 5round corner to sharp corner

        Please check the notes 4 regarding the making round corners to sharp corner and point to left like feature heading point to 1 2 3

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    • http://www.youranswerplace.org/branches-hours
      • 1In other pages it show at the top of this blue bar?

        In other pages it show at the top of this blue bar? I think it looks good above this blue bar as its showing in homework-help-1 screens

      • 2mouse over curser?

        I tested your website in Firefox and it show mouse pointer as a curser on the home page and library catalog page only.... this need be consistent thorough out the all tabs

  • Joel Glovier

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    That play button

    Posted on Jun 10, 2010 at 1:56 PM

    Nice work - overall very well done. Just a few thoughts to consider...(see notes)

    Overall great work. I'm sure it's worlds better than anything they ever had before. The actual site looks very usable. Nicely written markup and CSS. Kudos.

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      • 1looks too much like a "play" button

        The reason I don't like this, is not just because it looks exactly like a play button, but because of the connotation there. The play button is used on audio devices, which is sort of a contrast with reading or library material. It's confusing, too.

      • 2The book is a nice touch.

        I like the book illustration you've got going on here. I think you could also use a hand on the book page, or something "human" that helps to add to the "community" aspect.

      • 3logo needs work

        Just being honest, i think the logo needs some help. I think a lot more could be done with the book icon and not to sound redundant but the play button is confusing. Also I think you could really use some better typography. For one thing, the fonts are all too similar. If you have that many words, you need some complimentary fonts. I would suggest something like using a script or italicized serif font for the green words, or vise versa. And I'm not sure if the title is "...Library District" or "...District Library" because Library is above District. Of course, Library District doesn't make much sense, but that's what it looks like when first read.

      • 4Nice touch

        Like how you've incorporated these tabs.

      • 5rounded corners please

        I'd love to see these hover/active state bubbles have rounded corners (except the arrow part). The site is very sqaure right now, and I think some subtle rounded corners here and there would help to "soften it", as you've done with the kids and teens tabs.

      • 6nice touch

        like these arrows, both the color and the form is a good touch.

      • 7misaligned

        This button should be center aligned within the div. It looks off balance as is.

      • 8misaligned

        This box is sitting higher than the div to the left. It looks awkward this way.

      • 9needs some bottom margin

      • 10vertically center align this whole row

      • 11needs some additional bottom padding

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      • 1Excellent touch

        like the design elements here with the arrow for the heading

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    • http://www.youranswerplace.org/teens
      • 1nice touch

        like the school style notebook effects. great for a teens page

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    • http://www.youranswerplace.org/homework-help-1
      • 1nice touch

  • Missy

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    why the focus on research & links to other sites?

    Posted on Jun 09, 2010 at 4:33 PM

    When I go to my library's website, I want to look up and reserve a book, find out about book clubs and kids' activities, and find the hours. I don't think of a library website as a place to go for info links when they're so available elsewhere, but that could be my naivete about recent trends of library websites... :-)

    Seems like the home page would be a nice place to feature new arrivals, popular books, bookclub featured books, top audio books, that type of thing. I guess when I go to a library website I want to get pulled in by actual books! :-)

    I like the colors very much. The blue, green, and gray go great together. I'm not crazy about the particular graphic with the moose -- the bright blue seems to clash with the other colors.

    I love the tabs for kids and teens, and the prominent links for branches & hours, library catalog, and programs and events. I also really like the book with the letters coming out of it.

    I also like the arrows on the selected pages. And the homework help feature for kids is cool.

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    Nothing

    Posted on Jun 09, 2010 at 5:05 PM

    Looks flipping awesome, definitely engaging, too. Simultaneously kid friendly but not overly so it will drive others away.

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    The menus should be clearer

    Posted on Jun 09, 2010 at 5:25 PM

    I think it looks great. The elements are clear and the areas each have a distinct identity. I imagine your goal is to be understood by a very large range of users with a range of education and sophistication. I don't think this would be the place to be innovative. The one clear recommendation I have is about the menus. The top items in white may be hard to read and why are they in a different are from the other items against the green? I don't really need to know the answer but it might help your users figure out where they want to go.

  • Brad Wilson

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    I Was Going To Agree With Others

    Posted on Jun 09, 2010 at 6:32 PM

    About not enough content on the front page, but after looking at it a library has much information to disseminate and I am not sure that can be done by putting content on the start page. I find the page engages me with the wqealth of things that you can go to do.

    But most of all it shows whats new, what brings people to the library website. It creates a certain level of excitement for younger people which is highly desirable.

    Good colors, good graphics and new pertinent information. Good job

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    Search

    Posted on Jun 09, 2010 at 4:53 PM

    Hi,

    Site is great however I will interchange/swap the position of search boxes i.e. textfield should come before drop down.

    Why? What ever i type to search will be searched in 'this site','the web',etc other than the other way around (as currently is). I'd also change the submit button to Go/Search. Currently icon works but not sure everyone will get this?

    thanks and the best.

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    Typefaces & Elements to center

    Posted on Jun 10, 2010 at 2:40 AM

    I counted around more than 5 typefaces in use in your design (Logo, Menu, Feature/What's News - Summer reading etc). Try to use 3 typefaces, at a maximum. Your design will gain instant understanding at a glance.

    Likewise, I think you have to center some elements, it will gain harmony and readability.

    Regards, Chris

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      • 1Remove bubble speech

        We used to see rectangles in menu, I don't think bubble speech bring something more in this case.

      • 2Vertically centering

        Center vertically these search elements

      • 3Horizontally Centering

        As it's not centered, the feeling here is something is bad with that survey, and it's not engaging

      • 4Numbers has to be centered

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      • 1Alignement

        These two lines are not aligned and it gives odd feeling.

  • Kunal

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    nothing as such

    Posted on Jun 10, 2010 at 3:49 AM

    website looks very nice . As you took nice concept was inside pages having flipping effect?

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    Main Menu needs work

    Posted on Jun 10, 2010 at 7:36 AM

    The look goes in a good direction. I love the keyvisual on the top left, and the colors, but the book doesnt "sit" properlin on the green bar.

    • The Kids tab looks better than the Teens Tab by typography and by color

    • The main navigation menu doesnt look developed, and doesnt invite to click. It looks like another line of text. Try different font styles/sizes/colors/icons, or get inspired here: http://www.smashingmagazine.com/2008/02/26/navigation-menus-trends-and-examples/

    • you chose to place the headlines on a big orange arrow. The problem is that the arrow directs into "printer-friendly version". it doesnt make much sense.

    • I wouldnt choose capitals for the subnavigation, because it is not readable for a big amount of text.

      • you chose blue for subheadlines, which is confusing. The user grasps it as link and not as a headline.

      • the lines spacing is too small. if you enlarge it it will be more readable and look more professional.

  • Sumi

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    Revisit Target Audience and Philosophy

    Posted on Jun 10, 2010 at 7:54 AM

    At the first instance, I felt that that the website doesn’t really capture its targeted audience. Even though the age group for the site has been described as ‘all’, the site doesn’t seem to target the elderly and visually impaired.

    The library’s aim to revamp the website might be to get more outreach. So, it is very important to capture and sell, ‘what you can do while sitting at home’ at the homepage. The original, motto of the site needs to captured as well – ‘how can people contribute?’, ‘Does the library have reading groups as well’ (who knows!) All the ‘community’ features need to have strong element here. In this regard, giving good real estate to key elements like – reading programs seems appropriate.

    The Logo doesn’t resonate with the philosophy of the site. Especially, the little Pause / Play image on the book doesn’t match the ‘theme’ of the site.

    The ‘how do i…?’ label isn’t informative. Also, why do you want to show ‘home’ as a breadcrumb option here? Didn’t the user click on ‘how di i…?’

    The subtitles, ‘branches & hours’, ‘ebooks and downloadable audio books’ seem to be bigger in proportion to the main header.

    Because of the imageries and font used, the ‘For Teens’ section has a very ‘girlish’ feel to it.

    The overall color palette is not apt for the library and audience. White on Blue (as the global links) makes it very hard to read. The all capitalization style adds to the agony. Over usage of green, might cause blurriness and of course is an issue with visually impaired audience

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    the search box

    Posted on Jun 10, 2010 at 8:03 AM

    I love the colours, the website is very engaging and I find the session "how do i...?" very useful.

    However, since this is a library site, I am wondering if a library catalog search on first page isn´t more useful then a "basic search".

    Nice redesign thought.

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      • 1Search

        Maybe a library catalog search here...

  • Kenny Nguyen

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    the tan background tiles

    Posted on Jun 11, 2010 at 1:24 AM

    There are too many square blocks (the tan ones). they don't seem to be well aligned. something is off here and it makes the square blocks look slightly out of place.

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    take it easy

    Posted on Jun 11, 2010 at 12:05 PM

    the shadows are really harsh , the box is not aligned nicely too much to the left , the right side of the box is not touching ( so unrealistic ) else but that is really good , may be u should try to make another image for the make a splash read , the pale blue background is not so cool :)

    good luck

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    Highly readable, visually interesting

    Posted on Jun 11, 2010 at 5:25 PM

    Maybe it's personal preference, but for navigation purposes, there is a bit too much "back" button required. Library catalogue, registering for events, etc., all take you to a separate page which is disconnected from the redesign.

    Considering that it doesn't take up that much space on the page, it's somewhat unnecessary. AT the very least, open in a separate window or a popup.

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    Draft

    Posted on Sep 03, 2010 at 3:59 PM

    I think the overall design is nice. But having it left justified is throwing me off. good use of color, allthough I feel the book is really over powering the balance of the design.

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    Posted on Sep 19, 2010 at 12:45 AM

    Totally nitpicky... as everyone else has fairly thoroughly covered everything else.

    The gif your using for the "library district" logo is not matching the blue background, leaving a distinct visual line. Again, nitpicky, but, little things like that make the difference.

    :)

    Overall really nice.

    Sorry... just viewed source... Table's? sorry. no bueno for that content..(actually cut off in FireFox on mac)

    Is there a particular reason for no meta data? (if this is JUST design then sorry... )

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    Posted on Oct 03, 2010 at 6:15 AM

    Nice and very well done design.

    Original and creative idea. Very good written markup and CSS.

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    Posted on Oct 20, 2010 at 5:00 AM

    Navigation: above logo the nav is hidden is off. Book: concept is too good but the book needs to customize bit. Search: select box, input and and arrow button not aligned and also its not eye trackable somewhat like agian hidden.

    Overall the inner background color should be change looks dull.

    Thanks