Julian Streete

Skool Boy

By Julian Streete

   on Jul 27, 2009
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  • Brian Caicco

    Brian Caicco

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    the banner

    Posted on Jul 27, 2009 at 8:36 AM

    The logo is way to top heavy at the moment. I think you'll have a lot more success is the skool boy ribbon is enlarged and placed on the bottom1/3 of the book. This will create a bit more unity between the two elements. I love the idea though! Any other versions of the same logo?

    • Julian Streete
      Julian Streete commented:
      Posted: on Jul 27, 2009 at 9:06 AM

      Thank You Brian! That makes a lot of sense. I'll make a few edits and see what that looks like!

    • Brian Caicco
      Brian Caicco commented:
      Posted: on Jul 27, 2009 at 7:45 PM

      hey Julian, any update on the logo? I'd love to see the changes.

    • Julian Streete
      Julian Streete commented:
      Posted: on Aug 03, 2009 at 2:06 PM

      Hey Brian, I made edits like the ones you suggested and it felt a lot better. Will post in a few minutes

  • Aldo Gustavo Ribeiro

    Aldo Gustavo Ribeiro

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    reorder spaces

    Posted on Jul 27, 2009 at 1:56 PM

    There's something that I look and don't underestend. The book is open by my side or the other one... You can try to enlarge the banner and put the book inside the space and up orientation. Go ahead.

  • Oliver Martin

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    Perhaps too dark

    Posted on Aug 04, 2009 at 7:58 AM

    I'm not sure whether the client wants a dark book but if that's the case then that is fine for them but as a designer you should probably do a few concepts that are lighter or contrasted differently.

    I'm not sure about the ribbon. Somehow I think it wont fit "perfectly" against the shape of the book. Good luck though dude.