Hi Yannis,

I like you design - clean and simple. There are few usability issues though so I decided to spend 30 minutes to draw a quick wireframe of my simplified concept.

I hope it's self evident that

1. slider moved to more days = prices go down,

2. tick a page = all prices below go down,

3. add another inner page = prices of the next pages & products go down.

Keep up the good work.

Cheers!

Michael (usability aficionado)

The overall look is great, and straight for the money. The sliders really push how efficient and confident you are.

Only thing I really have a problem with is your margins: they're different everywhere, which makes areas looks cramped.

Fit your layout into a 12 column grid system (http://960.gs/ for a template) and everything will fall in place much neater.

The text in the middle "Native English isn't…" is too wide to read comfortably, so I'd either divide it into two columns, or slim the column and do something with the space.

All this will make more sense with a 12 column grid.

Hi Yannis,

I really like your layout and colour scheme and font choices, however, I am not confident on the logo symbol you have used because it’s a bit confusing and I can’t figure out what actually this symbol is depicting.

• Thinking from a creative perspective I appreciate the colour scheme used, however, for me copy writing is the worlds most serious and creative business and it’s really need a better colour and font’s composition. Attached is the some creative typography composition which will work for you. Also, you can check the same working in real time scenario on the following link: http://www.sapient.com You need to introduce a good image depicting your business and service... check the following link: http://www.tenfourwriting.co.uk. If you check the link you can see that how these guys have associated image with the content which makes it a more interactive to eyes. One more creative image of pen with some graphic on this link: http://chopin2010.pl/, this is just to show you the image concept.

• I think you can use a punch line (tag line) with a big typography style as in the attaché image e.g. Easy Copy, Hard Sales and then you can have the “How do you expect to.... English speakers?” to underneath the same. Also, I think an image also can be incorporated with this education content and punch line

Some general comments:

• Logo tagline line need to be a bit larger so that it can be read easily

• Navigation style is too thick... need to make it more subtle and smooth try using italic the fonts and remove the bold from it... checkout this website for navigation and may be for colour scheme as well.

• For testimonial check out this link: http://www.mailchimp.com/ and see how nice the testimonial section is!, also sponsored logo’s are placed very nicely

• I think if you work on the logo and try to make it more easy to understand then it will really help you a lot

• Overall you really need a huge makeover in design because this design doesn’t seem working for the prospective users/customers.

Hope this help.

Thanks, Haider

The design overall is very nice. You have really cool elements. ( the 100% guaranty bar, the navigation, the logo, the shape in the footer) but I feel that the design is missing something, it looks more like an inside page than a homepage, it's not very compelling in general aside from the nice design details

I would sugest using some imagery to give the website some life. Also i feel that the color palette needs some work, you have some really nice colors but there is not enough contrast in the colors in general.

Now, about, would i pay for your services. I think copywritting is very new to me, I have worked with peope that do ok, but charge much less than you do. My question is what makes you different from them? I think that is what you have to focus on. You have the prices there, but it would be nice to have an explanation for them. Also, i don't know if it's a good idea to put that information in the homepage. Let the people know you a little bit better before telling them your price.

Hope this helps,

Daniel

I love the design.

The logo is cool to it does say something about speaking but i feel it's lost in the design, there is no contrast or something there to make it stand out.

I don't like the arrow for the active button on main nav, but that's just me ...

The content ... it doesn't feel it belongs on a home page, if you want focus on the order form ... you don't have it yet and the space on the right makes the page a 2 column layout and this is a home page ... doesn't fit on this design.

i guess it looks really nice