Deevesh Gungaram

Logo Design

By Deevesh Gungaram

   on May 16, 2010
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  • Keli Marks

    Keli Marks

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    Draft

    Posted on May 16, 2010 at 10:05 PM

    hey my friend. Good start. I like your font, its serious, clean and communicates clarity.

    The icon seems too dislocated. Perhaps, you could try using that g as the first letter in gungaram?

    I'm not feeling the talk box at all, throws off the logo completely.

    Also, putting the g as your first letter will give more support to your last name. i like the aperture effect in the g, however i woud ad some sort of identification of the flash (the top of the g, that is what it is isn't it?)

    looking forward to seeing progress!

    • Deevesh Gungaram
      Deevesh Gungaram commented:
      Posted: on May 17, 2010 at 5:51 PM

      thank you for your comments, I have posted another idea. so what you think?

    • Keli Marks
      Keli Marks commented:
      Posted: on May 17, 2010 at 9:48 PM

      hey dude. not liking this new concept at all, has nothng to do with what you are trying to convey. its really hard making a logo for yourself. Heres what i would do. get out a pen and paper and just download your brain don't stop yourself, even if what you write is silly, get everything out: write down what you want to communicate and what you offer, use adjectives everything. then sort through and pick out interesting ideas.

      then take your name and play with initials. Change your font, you have a cool name, you should play with something more organic and original. meld your ideas you wrote down with your name and sketch sketch sketch sketch until your fingers bleed. best of luck

  • Gfgj J

    Gfgj J

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    Composition and unity

    Posted on May 17, 2010 at 7:52 AM

    Composition is poor. Choose a main element and make it bigger than everything else. It could be the upper symbol or the typography.

    Pay more attention to typography. The font you used for the name doesn't go with the type you used for the "g" symbol.

    Remove small elements. Try to find balance between small and large elements. I mean the net type of thing inside the "g" circle.

    Align everything - either put the upper element on top in the middle, ahead or behind the name. This just doesn't work.

    You may want to try different colors!

    • Deevesh Gungaram
      Deevesh Gungaram commented:
      Posted: on May 17, 2010 at 5:52 PM

      thank you, I have posted another idea, let me know what you think of.... thanks

  • Aran Barzanji

    Aran Barzanji

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    Draft

    Posted on May 17, 2010 at 5:05 PM

    Well, at least its original...

  • Rich Brown

    Rich Brown

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    No quirks

    Posted on May 17, 2010 at 5:12 PM

    I'm not too fussed on the square speech bubble designs and think the 'g' is too busy with the spiral in middle.

    For the very minimal concept, it's a nice idea but I don't think it would stand out that well and doesn't show off any wittiness or clever quirks which is what a graphic designer should be using. Perhaps keep the box and manipulate the characters. Also reduce the spacing between the Title and Tag line.

    • Deevesh Gungaram
      Deevesh Gungaram commented:
      Posted: on May 17, 2010 at 5:54 PM

      ok thank you... i try to give a look at your suggestion and see what it gives...