Joe Mulberry

Birthday Card

By Joe Mulberry

   on May 16, 2010
5 Reviews3 Votes0 Favorites734 Views

Concept Reviews

  • Will Pillar

    Will Pillar

    Rank: 7 Student

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    Add something to top-right corrner

    Posted on May 16, 2010 at 12:47 PM

    I really like this, the illustration looks good (though I don't know what "Andy" looks like).

    The text might be better in a different colour, though I don't have a good suggestion for that.

    As stated above, I think if you added something in the top-right corner it would balance everything out nicely, like his age? Or a rosette? Or something?

  • Ashley

    Ashley

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
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    I like it...

    Posted on May 16, 2010 at 8:45 PM

    Its simple and too the point! I could picture this as a birthday card!

  • Kunal

    Kunal

    Rank: 2 Titan

    1604

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    colors

    Posted on May 17, 2010 at 12:12 AM

    every thing is nice but colors not happening.

  • Ryan

    Ryan

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Design

    Posted on May 17, 2010 at 1:50 PM

    It is a fun looking concept, but doesn't say birthday to me. I feel more along the lines of a get well soon card, or a thank you card.

  • Rebecca

    Rebecca

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    Funny

    Posted on May 19, 2010 at 9:19 PM

    love the drawing, funky card. sticks to the point!