Trace Bundy poster

Great Design!

First and foremost, fantastic typography! Only thing that's a little confusing is the headliner's name... is it Bundy or Undy?

it's totally awesome!

I love the details in this poster, great job!

very nice. i especialy like the B and guitar thing, good work

I loved it!!! Even when I so it as an icon in the starting page of conceptfeedback.com... it was so small and I still got it!... Fantastic!

Colors, everything!

thank you for your talent! :)

I really Love the design its great!!!!

However this works, but I can imagine putting this up in a schoolhall it may not catch to much attention.

From design perspective it looks finished with very good attention for detail. I like how you used the guitar to create a B for Bundy, Didn't notice it at first, but when you see it, it's really cool.

I think this piece is on the verge of perfect!

I would personally only tweak up 4 things on the poster.

Maybe change the "with" so it is not italic, maybe make the background of the guitar and Bundy the same as the pattern that you have set in back or visa versa.

I would line up that red line above Central Washington University and the stuff between that and the bar under Bundy to a left alignment point.

Lastly, I would pull that seven a bit more away from the P in PM. and line up the top of the 7PM to the top of the FREE.

Cool looking tickets and overall great concept!

This is very beautifully done!

Only thing i didnt quite get at first glance, possibly because the guitar isnt 100% obvious, is that the poster is for a music event, maybe some silhouettes on the damask of a crowd emerging from under the white or something else to suggest music/concert. Loving the textures, great overall design, awesome colours.

Only other thing is the B, thought it was Undy until i read the comments :P

Love the tipography!

As usual, your work with type is strong and noticeable. I do think this work stands nicely as is.

However, if you were to re-visit the poster I would look for more ways to tie in with the background wallpaper. The slight occlusion from the guitar is all we have right now.

The tickets, pulled the wallpaper in rather well by including some type over it and by "finishing" the half guitar with the left border. Everything feels necessary for balance.

BTW, I like the orthogonal type placement on the tickets too. It's nice to remember possibilities of a format that fits nicely in your hands.

I can see you put a drop shadow around the poster but it would be interesting to see a light source coming from a certain angle. Other than that I LOVE this. I love how grungy and worn out it feels. Excellent job.

The ONLY thing that needs work is how bright and dominant the foreground is compared to the background.

Perhaps combat this by making the top and bottom edges of the white foreground grungy and decaying, this would keep the theme but allow you to have a clean white colour for the typo so that it still stands out.

Nice design of poster. A 2-color job can be difficult to pull off the design. I believe that this is siimple, yet effect 2-color design.

Is this your original idea to use the guitar body as the the letter B? This design looks beautiful. I want to see Trace Bundy perform now even though I know nothing about her music or if she is any good.

Yeah, super cool. Great typography and awesome colors, love the textures, too. The guitar/letter B is a great move.

Nice!

I've actually used that damask texture you're using for a poster :) I'll have to post that concept later today. I love the aged look and the textures you've used. The typography is great. REally nothing negative :)

The little touches you have added to the overal design is what makes it. (small icons outside the location and the distressed corner). I would have to agree with the top and bottom margins comment by Myers. It might look more active if the top margin was larger than the bottom or visa versa. Very nice work!