Stephan Wehner

Rock Paper Scissors Online game

By Stephan Wehner

   on Apr 27, 2010
7 Reviews1 Vote0 Favorites258 Views

Concept Reviews

  • Mateus Pinheiro

    Mateus Pinheiro

    Rank: 1 Elite

    272

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Fonts

    Posted on Apr 27, 2010 at 10:23 PM

    Very clean layout. But the problem is that is TOO clean. Try playing with some different types like Georgia and Trebuchet MS, different weights, italic, underline.

    And try making more contrast from the top bar to the content. The color difference is so subtle that I can't see it at a glance.

    About the purple icon, try making it smaller or aligning it better, because this way broke the text flow.

    The icons are OK, but the buttons could have a little more work. If you put a lighter blue stroke and add some subtle bevel I think that will be a great difference.

    Keep going!

  • Kars Kremers

    Kars Kremers

    Rank: 1 Elite

    370

    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 1
    0 Votes
    Design

    Posted on Apr 28, 2010 at 3:16 AM

    I think it's really nice you've added the 3 player rules.

    Let me start with the game flow. First page is very clear, but step one is a really weird one. The link that needs to be copied should be in a textfield, already selected with a 'copy' button next to it, so all I have to do is press the button so the link is copied.

    Step two: Why can't I just write down my name, in stead of scrolling trough a whole list of letter? What if I'm playing with someone with the same Initial?

    The game: It could use the actual words "rock, paper, scissors" under the icons, but other then that it works great!! If possible, I'd make it so if either one of the players clicks "next round" the other screen goes as well.

    And then the design .. although it's very clear, it's also very poor for such a simple game. There is not a few specific things, there is just a lot of icon styles mixed together, a lot of colours, a logo that seems to be made pixel by pixel. There is a thousand directions you could go to with this. Pick a theme/ style and completely redesign.

    Well done on making the game itself!

  • jero

    jero

    Rank: 10 Newbie

    3

    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
    0 Votes
    Change background color

    Posted on Apr 28, 2010 at 3:48 AM

    Change background color

  • Kinda

    Kinda

    Rank: 10 Newbie

    40

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    i like it

    Posted on Apr 28, 2010 at 7:06 AM

    i like it

  • Tomas Nilsson

    Tomas Nilsson

    Rank: 4 Master

    59

    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
    0 Votes
    Make it more appealing

    Posted on Apr 28, 2010 at 8:20 AM

    This is a casual game, but the web page is not fun and inviting. By adding some pictures of, perhaps, people playing the game IRL and not having the entire page in black, I think your visitors will get a more pleasant experience. That way you are also able to focus the attention of the visitor to where you want them to look.

    Why are you using an initial when playing? Should be able to choose a nickname.

    Your page needs to be remade from scratch with a clear direction set out (which does not seem to have been the case here).

  • Paolo Dello Vicario

    Paolo Dello Vicario

    Rank: 7 Student

    34

    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    Icons and images

    Posted on Apr 28, 2010 at 12:32 PM

    You can change the logo and the buttons first. Icons of player are like aMSN men, change it. And the buttons are not beautiful..

    The template is too clean: test it with textures :) Paolo

  • Mrx Xisay

    Mrx Xisay

    Rank: 4 Master

    24

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    I like it...

    Posted on Apr 28, 2010 at 6:33 PM

    Maybe need a color palette, not only Black, but I like it !

    • Stephan Wehner
      Stephan Wehner commented:
      Posted: on May 12, 2010 at 11:38 AM

      Thanks to everyone for taking a look and reviewing the design! Very helpful!

      Changes are coming.

      -- Stephan