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I like the logo and the cartoon image fits in with the image of paintball.
The menu bar has the information I would be looking for - the games available, the price plans and about you. The photographs are good and show different aspects of playing paintball.
The tournament box seems a bit out of place in comparison to the styling for the rest of the site.
I like the colour scheme, background images, etc and font types which I personally think tie in well with the image of paintball.
If I was looking to go paintballing with friends/colleagues and I came across your site I would most definitely explore this site further and consider it as an option.
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Good job with this design. The black intro heading looks good on the lighter background. I think everything in the top half flows well except for the tournament image, as Euan also mentioned. Maybe use a large paint splatter for this area or a picket fence or a barrel (all these things I've seen on the field).
I'm not really feeling the double forward slash in front of the Read More links. Either use arrows, a different graphic, button, or nothing.
As you move down the page, it loses the fun, illustration feel that you gave the top. I'd like to see a few more splatters, guns, masks, air tanks, balls, etc... incorporated.
Nice touch with the mask on the bird!
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Ashim D'silva commented:Posted your comment on Euan's spot by mistake: "Cheers mate. The tourny box is meant to stick out though since it will change though. You're right about the bottom half of the page, I think I'll use the box type border to separate the footer or underline read more links…"
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I really like it. Even after looking at it for a couple of minutes, I couldn't spot anything that doesn't appeal to me. Great job!
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Love it, as i did the first version.
My only change would be the Locations part of your footer, it seems crammed to the left, plenty of room on the right of it, so give it a little more room to breathe.
Great work.
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Ashim D'silva commented:
Thanks Alan. The locations thing does bother me, but it's aligned to a grid and if some addresses have longer lines it'll balance out. Will rethink that a bit once I have real content.
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really loving it
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Hi Ashim,
This looks fantastic - great job of getting so much information across.
The only think I'd change would be to align the Call for bookings or information bottom of box with the baseline of the body copy to the left of it.
Also would move The Parking Lot across to left align to the S of Skirmish.
But really these are tiny things - overall it looks fantastic - really nicely done and good attention to detail.
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Ashim D'silva commented:
Thanks a tonne!! A 5 all the way from none other than THE emma simpson :D
With websites, since they have dynamic content, I try to be a little messy with placement that could be affected by text changes (the bookings button). Once real text is put in, I'll see how it fits but I like to know that things won't suffer greatly if something is out of place because some text changed length.
'The Parking Lot' needs a little realignment :D
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Emma Simpson commented:Hahahaha - the brilliant twitter icon should have a 5 all by himself :D
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Ashim D'silva commented:
Hahaha, yes; always immense fun working directly with an artist. Now if only this client would stop being such a client and get moving :D
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Cheers mate. The tourny box is meant to stick out though since it will change though. You're right about the bottom half of the page, I think I'll use the box type border to separate the footer or underline read more links…