Joe Mulberry

My Digital Playground

By Joe Mulberry

   on Apr 16, 2010
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  • Tom Stoecklein

    Tom Stoecklein

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    Work on type used for teaser (Hey, I'm Joe...)

    Posted on Apr 16, 2010 at 1:10 PM

    First thing's first: I love the vibrant use of color with your header; all in all, the design as a whole is a huge step forward from your site's current design.

    There are really only 3 minor things I'd consider changing:

    1) Looking at the typeface used for your teaser, I can't help but feel the x-height feels a touch squished (due to stretching); compared to the more open feel of the rest of the type choices you've made, it feels wrong and out of place.

    2) It's a minor thing but for the latest images at the bottom, have you considered switching the order of the image title & the category (i.e. 'animations' comes first instead of 'Character Design Timelapses')?

    Other than that, I have to say, it's a pretty awesome piece of work. I look forward to seeing it up on your site, mainly so I can see how you plan on extending it throughout the interior pages.

    Cheers Tom

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Apr 16, 2010 at 3:21 PM

      Tom,

      Thanks for your kind words as well as your criticisms.

      The text is a little squished, I don't remember doing that so much have been me nudging things around and effecting the text without me noticing and then me blind to the problem :) I will fix it.

      The 'character design timelapses' is actually an animation post although it sounds like an illustration post..... I guess it would be more obvious that the order was correct with a obvious animation post. Is that what you meant?

      I will be cracking on with the interior pages after nailing any changes to this and will post them here as well.

      Thanks for you help

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Works well

    Posted on Apr 19, 2010 at 7:09 AM

    I think all of this is working pretty well. The site is consistent, clean and creative. The header isn't quite aligned correctly. I might lose the header image and just make the introduction paragraph more visually appealing and span the entire width of the page.I would also add a subtle drop shadow to the page and fade it out after the header. It would add just a little dimension. Great work, let me know if you have any more questions, thanks!

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Apr 21, 2010 at 8:37 PM

      thanks nate,

      i am continuing to work on it

      cheers

  • Emma Simpson

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    Ranged left rather than right

    Posted on Apr 22, 2010 at 6:06 PM

    This is by far my favourite version of your site design so far.

    It feels much more balanced and the block elements below are now balancing and reflecting your header design. I also like your sketch to finished version in the top left.

    The only thing which jars for me is your Hey I'm Joe part and it's a slight thing. Maybe try ranging it left and align the left edge of the text with the left side of your tutorial images. I can see that you've tried to balance it with the part of your sketch which overhangs on the right but the edge of your green character aligns with the right edge of the tutorial images so it should work. Maybe also make that text jsut a little smaller and watch the kerning. The space between the 'J' and the 'o' is large compared to the 'o' and 'e'.

    But overall great design. Really like how you've worked each version of your design and the improvement along the way.

  • Felipe Marquardt

    Felipe Marquardt

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    Paragraph font

    Posted on Apr 16, 2010 at 8:33 AM

    Like the menu idea and colors, and the idea of the oppacity. the paragraph font I don´t like. It seams a little streatched. Could ad some interesting content at the footer, with some illustrations, social media links, menus. Make it more usefull. Like the little shadow at the thumbs and the contrast of the thumbs with the background. Could try something different at the top drawing. The bars in front of the eyes are a little distracting.

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Apr 16, 2010 at 3:32 PM

      Felipe,

      Thanks for your feedback.

      I am working on the paragraph as everyone seems to have noticed the stretching apart from me!

      I had a footer in the last design and on my current online version (in fact the online version has one of my creatures on it). The problem being that I don't have too much content to put there. I could move the contact links from the body into it but... ermmmmm i will have a look and see.

      I agree with you about the eyes, I will have a play around with those lines

      thanks

  • Tom Foster

    Tom Foster

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    type

    Posted on Apr 16, 2010 at 8:54 AM

    compared to your current website, this one is leaps and bounds above.

    I really like your header, my only concern is the links below may be overpowered by the large letters and bold colouring above.

    The blurb text looks squashed, but that might be just my eyes :D.

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Apr 16, 2010 at 3:30 PM

      Tom,

      I totally agree with your regarding my current site :)

      the blurb text is at the hospital getting fixed up as I type.

      Many people have commented about the navigation in previous versions - I think with the hover effect they are more noticeable. I have tried a few variations out but keep coming back to this one, maybe i am too stubborn! :)

      Thanks for your feedback

  • Rudolph Gottesheim

    Rudolph Gottesheim

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    The "Hay, I'm Joe..." text shouldn't be stretched

    Posted on Apr 16, 2010 at 9:43 AM

    I love it. Pretty everything looks great, except for the "Hey, I'm Joe..." paragraph. The stretching looks really cheap.

  • Janne Siera

    Janne Siera

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    Letter spacing

    Posted on Apr 16, 2010 at 10:54 AM

    Oh I just love this design! The header is so cool and I love all the bright colours.

    What I immediately noticed though, is the letter spacing of "Hey, I'm Joe and ... ". So with less letter spacing and perhaps adjusting the hight of the letters as well it'll be just perfect.

    Also the links "More animations >", "More illustrations >", ... could work when being a little bigger as well. Try it out and see if it makes any difference.

    I agree with Felipe that there's an opportunity in the footer. Some buttons for people to share, or a nice "cry for feedback" button. Either way, I suggest an image (like one of your little creatures) to "jump out" of the grid (which nicely structures the page, btw).

    Great job!

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Apr 16, 2010 at 3:25 PM

      Janne,

      I am glad you like the design and like the bold use of colours :)

      Many others have mentioned the intro text is a little off, so that's something that I am cracking on with now, thanks.

      I will try the links a bit bigger as you suggested, I didnt want them to take over other elements but you are right that they maybe fading out of attention too easily.

      I had a footer in the last design and on my current online version (in fact the online version has one of my creatures on it). The problem being that I don't have too much content to put there. I could move the contact links from the body into it but... ermmmmm i will have a look and see.

      thanks for feedback and look forward to seeing your first concept

      joe

  • innovocus

    innovocus

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    Great use of colors, vibrant and engaging.

  • Bartek Wiktorowicz

    Bartek Wiktorowicz

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    background

    Posted on Apr 16, 2010 at 9:09 AM

    like the header's colours and 3 steps under header it cool imo

  • Dustin

    Dustin

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    Looks Pretty Cool

    Posted on Apr 16, 2010 at 3:01 PM

    Your design is very original, but the purpose of the site does not seem to jump out at me. Perhaps rephrasing your interest paragraph to say something along the lines of "Hey, i'm Joe and i design webpages for clients" or something would be better.

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Apr 16, 2010 at 3:13 PM

      Dustin,

      Thanks for your review,

      The purpose of the site is for me to post my own personal creations, its a non-commercial site and I don't design professionally and don't have any clients. I tried to convey this with mentioning that i create stuff in my 'spare time' and this is my 'digital playground'. I could explain things better but I would need more words, however - just below is a 'learn a little more >' button linking to my 'about mojoe.5' which would give a in depth explaination.

      Thanks for your thoughts but as no-one else has mentioned this I am happy with the current minimal explaination on the index page.

      thanks

    • Janne Siera
      Janne Siera commented:
      Posted: on Apr 16, 2010 at 4:10 PM

      I think that intro text explains it just fine :). There's some magic in the word "playground".

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Apr 17, 2010 at 12:18 AM

      Thanks Janne

  • Robin Francis

    Robin Francis

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    Not a damd thing!

    Posted on Apr 16, 2010 at 4:03 PM

    Love this design it's ubercool!

  • Jaseem TS

    Jaseem TS

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    Font of " Joe" ??? :)

    Posted on Apr 17, 2010 at 7:53 AM

    The site looks very orignal :) Like it very much :) Pretty colorful and minimal too :)

    Although , the font of Joe seems a bit stretched , a change in font ???

  • Paul De Morsella

    Paul De Morsella

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    alignment

    Posted on Oct 11, 2010 at 12:07 AM

    It seems like it should be a grid based design but each section is doing it's own thing; none of the vertical lines from the header match up to blocks of space in the blurb area nor with the thumbnail area. Alignment is a bit chaotic.

    Not crazy about the bg colors. I think white would look crisper in the main body section.

    I really like the header - strong and interesting!

  • Javier SM

    Javier SM

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    the phrase, im not sure that would be the better one

    Posted on Apr 16, 2010 at 8:26 AM

    Sorry i dont know what would be better.

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Apr 16, 2010 at 3:34 PM

      thanks Javier,

      I think your concerns were also mentioned by others

      thanks