Ashley

Website design for www.windowwize.co.uk

By Ashley

   on Apr 11, 2010
4 Reviews1 Vote0 Favorites249 Views

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  • Jamal Jackson

    Jamal Jackson

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
    1 Vote
    Improve Layout

    Posted on Apr 12, 2010 at 2:14 PM

    Hi Ashly, here is what I think will make your design better

    1. The layout needs work. The current layout that you have does not support the type of information you want to provide. I would suggest starting over and reanalyze the amount of information on each page, the placement of images and text and spacing. You should add more white space to make it more appealing to read.

    2. The quoted phrases. They seem out of place and should be considered for removal or better placement once you improve the layout. The color choice for them does not suit the overall color scheme of your site as well.

    3. Your Color scheme. You should go to adobe kuler or ttp://colorschemedesigner.com/ to help find one, they help me out a lot. Also, make the links the same colors of the scheme.

    4. Alignment. All your text should be aligned the same. Remove the space between the text under the headlines and the paragraph.

    I hope my feedback helps.

  • Ben Rothschild

    Ben Rothschild

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

    35

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Just needs a few tweaks

    Posted on Apr 12, 2010 at 6:42 PM

    I think that the header is a little weird. The room seems dark, not exactly the image a window company should have. Also, having your logo (is that your logo?) on the botton right side of your header seems counterintuitive.

    Some of your pictures are stunning, but the carousel seems a bit amateurish to me.

    I would play around with fonts. in my opinion is is too small.

    Make the site brighter!! After all windows make a site brighter!! :-D

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

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    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    Great pics

    Posted on Apr 12, 2010 at 9:53 PM

    These are great pics of what the company can do, but unfortunately I think the design leaves a lot to be desired. It looks like you have absolutely no content and the whole is essentially pictures. The little text that you do have is really underplayed. The logo and navigation are hidden and barely visible. I think you need to take a step back from this and start fresh.

  • Brian Whiting

    Brian Whiting

    Rank: 10 Newbie

    146

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    make the form more interactive

    Posted on Apr 12, 2010 at 1:57 PM

    Hi Ashley,

    I have some ideas to make it more engaging for the users and more creative but still professional in my eyes:

    1. Make the form more interactive in the contact us section, it seems a little bit plain and simple to me
    2. The mix of the fonts is great work for the different users that you will bring to the site, how about add a button at the top to allow a switch in big to small font.

    These are my only real ideas for a possible fix in the website at the moment because everything else looks great at the moment from the design and interaction viewpoint