Ezequiel Jaime

New Flash Website for a Law Firm in Netherland

By Ezequiel Jaime

   on Apr 09, 2010
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  • Steve Wilmes

    Steve Wilmes

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 5
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    the header "contact" text needs a little more contrast

    Posted on Apr 09, 2010 at 11:22 PM

    Overall great work. The contrast on the title header needs a little more punch, otherwise great show.

  • Joe Mulberry

    Joe Mulberry

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
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    fill the space

    Posted on Apr 10, 2010 at 4:49 AM

    firstly, are you clients wanting to use this as their main site with no ipad/iphone accessibility? If so, then explain the need for a non-flash version as well and increase your fee! :)

    On this design, i like the corporate feel to it, however, there is a lot of unused real-estate. Have you though about enlarging the size of the navigation side bar and its text?

    Would be good to see the index page rather than the contact page though??

    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Apr 10, 2010 at 6:48 PM

      Please check the URL. Thanks for your review.

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Apr 10, 2010 at 6:57 PM

      some nice stuff on there, will the site have flash and non-flash versions? Current view from iPod Touch messaged to you... if it works

      I like the background transitions on page changes but i reiterate my previous points:

      there is a lot of unused real-estate. Have you though about enlarging the size of the navigation side bar and its text?

      joe

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    • Design: 2
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    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
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    Too simple and spread out.

    Posted on Apr 12, 2010 at 8:40 PM

    This design is unfortunately too simple and spread out. You need to condense the design and get rid of unneeded empty space. It also look backward with the logo on the right of the design instead of the left.

    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Apr 12, 2010 at 9:13 PM

      Hi Nate, thanks for your review. Did you check the URL? It's a liquid layout.

    • Nate Hamilton
      Nate Hamilton commented:
      Posted: on Apr 12, 2010 at 10:40 PM

      Yep, unfortunately I have the same thoughts even seeing the live version. The flash roll in is cool but the spacing and general layout looks a bit off.

  • Javier

    Javier

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 2
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    I like it

    Posted on Apr 12, 2010 at 11:19 PM

    good color palette Ezequiel, I like how you worked the transitions between page, but I think your customer made the wrong choice, I don't think that a flash animated website is the best option for a law office , fill all that space it's going to be a challenge for you man, maybe using some pictures to support the content, will help you a lot