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I like concept 5, either one is nice. I don't like the font used for Aljiro. No reason really why, it just rubs me the wrong way.
Good start!
I think... I am ok with Aljiro, however, to make it really more creative you can work on the typography for creative and try some more option.
Why do you always rate 1?
I think that is very harsh, especially when you put 'Good Start' in your review.
Concepts 2, 3 and 4 all look like some sort of Airport parking sign, and nothing to do with design, so i woulod levae those.
I like the first design, but don't like the font used for Aljiro, you have a good contrast on the colours, so maybe try with a few different fonts and see what you get.
I like Conept 1 it's the only one of the 3 versions which is readable in smaller sizes.
I also like the Aljiro typeface, i hope it's a custom one !)
Maybe you should try to place an ikon or something more interesting, which shows your creative potential? You know a little more Statement...
I like the bottom version the best; looks clean and interesting.
Would look good in one colour prints/designs.
I think you're headed in the right direction with #5, I really like the bottom one.
This doesn't seem to be much different then your first concept and I have a lot of the same criticism's on this design as I did your previous. I would try something completely different and outside the box. Try incorporating some sort of imagery or logo stamp to this. Your typography needs to flow better. The fonts you chose don't have enough similarities to be used together. Keep working on this.