Leo Aljiro San Luis

Aljiro Creative Logo Draft 1

By Leo Aljiro San Luis

   on Apr 07, 2010
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  • Martin Laritz

    Martin Laritz

    Rank: 7 Student

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    Aljiro Font

    Posted on Apr 07, 2010 at 8:33 AM

    I like concept 5, either one is nice. I don't like the font used for Aljiro. No reason really why, it just rubs me the wrong way.

  • Adam Gold

    Adam Gold

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    Effects

    Posted on Apr 07, 2010 at 8:39 AM

    I like concept 5. Try to add more effects.

  • Haider Ali

    Haider Ali

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
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    work on "creative" wording

    Posted on Apr 07, 2010 at 8:39 AM

    Good start!

    I think... I am ok with Aljiro, however, to make it really more creative you can work on the typography for creative and try some more option.

    • Alan Horne
      Alan Horne commented:
      Posted: on Apr 07, 2010 at 8:40 AM

      Why do you always rate 1?

      I think that is very harsh, especially when you put 'Good Start' in your review.

    • Haider Ali
      Haider Ali commented:
      Posted: on Apr 07, 2010 at 9:00 AM

      my apologize if I sounded harsh...

  • Alan Horne

    Alan Horne

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 3
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    • Originality: 3
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    scrap the icon.

    Posted on Apr 07, 2010 at 8:39 AM

    Concepts 2, 3 and 4 all look like some sort of Airport parking sign, and nothing to do with design, so i woulod levae those.

    I like the first design, but don't like the font used for Aljiro, you have a good contrast on the colours, so maybe try with a few different fonts and see what you get.

  • Mike Konjevic

    Mike Konjevic

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
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    More Statement

    Posted on Apr 07, 2010 at 9:34 AM

    I like Conept 1 it's the only one of the 3 versions which is readable in smaller sizes.

    I also like the Aljiro typeface, i hope it's a custom one !)

    Maybe you should try to place an ikon or something more interesting, which shows your creative potential? You know a little more Statement...

  • Levin Mejia

    Levin Mejia

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
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    Work with the words more...

    Posted on Apr 07, 2010 at 10:08 AM

    I like the bottom version the best; looks clean and interesting.

    Would look good in one colour prints/designs.

  • Curtis Scott

    Curtis Scott

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    Expand on concept 5

    Posted on Apr 07, 2010 at 10:44 AM

    I think you're headed in the right direction with #5, I really like the bottom one.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    • Design: 2
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    • Originality: 2
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    Not much different

    Posted on Apr 07, 2010 at 9:02 PM

    This doesn't seem to be much different then your first concept and I have a lot of the same criticism's on this design as I did your previous. I would try something completely different and outside the box. Try incorporating some sort of imagery or logo stamp to this. Your typography needs to flow better. The fonts you chose don't have enough similarities to be used together. Keep working on this.