Brittany Lawrence

Personal Logo

By Brittany Lawrence

   on Apr 05, 2010
10 Reviews1 Vote1 Favorite374 Views
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  • Michael Ho

    Michael Ho

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    One word, Awesome!

    Posted on Apr 05, 2010 at 11:08 PM

    Nate Hamilton is right, black and white will looks good too. Definitely votes on the 2nd version.

    Helping the people to get a clearer view of your TC, no harm just a suggestion on attachment. :)

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  • Erin Davidson

    Erin Davidson

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    tweak lightbulb symbol

    Posted on Apr 06, 2010 at 12:12 AM

    Nice design and concept. If you didn't tell me it was a lightbulb I would not have realized it. It looks more like an latch of some sort because it is on its side. I think stylizing the lower "metal" area into a more recognizable design (ie. the grooves of the lightbulb) would help people identify the symbol quicker.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    The gradient is too much

    Posted on Apr 05, 2010 at 8:40 PM

    The gradient makes this more complicated then needed. I really like the black and white version you had a whole lot better. Don't overcomplicated the logo.

    • Brittany Lawrence
      Posted: on Apr 05, 2010 at 8:43 PM

      True true.. I got too excited about the gradient. I tend to do that, hehe! I made a second version which I think is better.

    • Nate Hamilton
      Nate Hamilton commented:
      Posted: on Apr 05, 2010 at 8:59 PM

      Yeah, the second version is better but I think I still gravitate toward the black and white version.

  • Javier

    Javier

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    1 Vote
    color

    Posted on Apr 06, 2010 at 3:33 AM

    I think with this gradient you want to simulate the effect produced for a bulb turned on, the intention is good, but with this gradient you are getting several colors that are not helping to transmit your concept, what about try the same gradient effect in black and white, then instead several colors you will get several tones

  • mylogomyprice maloo

    mylogomyprice maloo

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    Would add the name 'thinking creative'

    Posted on Apr 06, 2010 at 5:00 AM

    the colour could be worked out a little as its not soothing to eye, but the bulb part looks nice. I would have wanted to add the name "thinking creative" to give more clarity to the logo

  • Tavano Team

    Tavano Team

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    lightbulb needs improvment

    Posted on Apr 06, 2010 at 8:04 AM

    I like the second version, the first one doesn't look good. Also, like Erin Davidson says, if you didn't tell us that was a lightbulb we wouldnt realized it.

  • Angela Brown

    Angela Brown

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    0 Votes
    Nice!

    Posted on Apr 06, 2010 at 7:53 PM

    I think it's really great! The colors are are a really good choice and the light bulb is clever. It looks much better in color than black and white.

  • Levin Mejia

    Levin Mejia

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    Use top concept

    Posted on Apr 07, 2010 at 10:14 AM

    I like the gradient on the top, have you tried other colours?

  • Alexandra

    Alexandra

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    Great idea

    Posted on Apr 26, 2010 at 11:08 PM

    I like it, but I think Michael's idea is a nice touch.

    I also think it's hard to get light bulb from ur symbol. I think the top part, the curvy part, is actually well drawn, but the base of it isn't working for me. The base is normally taller and less fat in light bulbs.

    I think with some more work, this logo will turn out great.

  • Silviya Kuneva

    Silviya Kuneva

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    the colour

    Posted on Apr 06, 2010 at 2:09 AM

    I think the second version is better but if u change the colour of the TC to black for instance and leave the red of the bulb, it would be better.