Miro

Vehicle wrap

By Miro

   on Apr 05, 2010
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  • Ezequiel Jaime

    Ezequiel Jaime

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    Incomplete

    Posted on Apr 05, 2010 at 4:31 PM

    Hello Miro,

    Lol, I can't stop laughing about the girl coming out through the window.

    Anyways, back to important:

    First of all, you need to show the client how your design will look from side, rear and front of the vehicle. Always is a good a continuing artwork.

    Second, you need to activate the brand, not just placing the logo on a background.

    Third, it's always better to follow the shape of the vehicle when you design, this will make both things, vehicle and design, look like thay are a same thing and not just a sticker on it. Right now it looks too striking.

    The girl is really funny, but client probably would have thought you are making fun of him/her.

    Finally, you are missing all contact information, this is very relevant.

    I hope his can help.

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Apr 06, 2010 at 10:15 AM

      Thanks, Ezequiel. I was dead serious when I was making this :-)) I just finished the second version, thank you very much for the help!

  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    I totally agree... with Ezequiel

    Posted on Apr 05, 2010 at 4:46 PM

    Hey Miro

    I can see why the client may not have liked this, I agree with all of Ezequiel's comments.

    The girl just randomly sits there, and the logo looks like it was an afterthought, and the the speedy stripes look really odd, their colors aren't quite right either...

    Plus you didn't even add their web address...

    I have illustrator car templates about 300 or so if you want some, side front top view always important...

    Below is a shot of one i did for my client

    Good Luck, hope that this helps

    • officecar_cleancorp.jpg
    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Apr 06, 2010 at 10:32 AM

      Thanks, Aaran. The client actually gave all the car templates but I decided to give it a try with just that side view.

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Apr 06, 2010 at 1:16 PM

      Aaran, do you need a WV Crafter template to your collection?

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Apr 06, 2010 at 2:41 PM

      Oops, sorry, VW Crafter of course, lol.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Unfortunately I agree with the client

    Posted on Apr 05, 2010 at 7:59 PM

    Unfortunately I agree with the client. The wrap in general is a little over the top cheesy. The woman looks like she is going clubbing and the then you have a vacuum behind her. The ray makes things look really busy and is very distracting. The worst part is that the logo is the last place I look. Hopefully I wasn't too harsh here, but I think this isn't working.

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Apr 06, 2010 at 10:34 AM

      No, you weren´t too harsh, Nate. I still get a smile on my face every time I see that girl :-D.

  • Rommel Bagtas

    Rommel Bagtas

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    3d view

    Posted on Apr 06, 2010 at 12:34 AM

    seen it before