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Hello Miro,
Lol, I can't stop laughing about the girl coming out through the window.
Anyways, back to important:
First of all, you need to show the client how your design will look from side, rear and front of the vehicle. Always is a good a continuing artwork.
Second, you need to activate the brand, not just placing the logo on a background.
Third, it's always better to follow the shape of the vehicle when you design, this will make both things, vehicle and design, look like thay are a same thing and not just a sticker on it. Right now it looks too striking.
The girl is really funny, but client probably would have thought you are making fun of him/her.
Finally, you are missing all contact information, this is very relevant.
I hope his can help.
Hey Miro
I can see why the client may not have liked this, I agree with all of Ezequiel's comments.
The girl just randomly sits there, and the logo looks like it was an afterthought, and the the speedy stripes look really odd, their colors aren't quite right either...
Plus you didn't even add their web address...
I have illustrator car templates about 300 or so if you want some, side front top view always important...
Below is a shot of one i did for my client
Good Luck, hope that this helps
Thanks, Aaran. The client actually gave all the car templates but I decided to give it a try with just that side view.
Unfortunately I agree with the client. The wrap in general is a little over the top cheesy. The woman looks like she is going clubbing and the then you have a vacuum behind her. The ray makes things look really busy and is very distracting. The worst part is that the logo is the last place I look. Hopefully I wasn't too harsh here, but I think this isn't working.
No, you weren´t too harsh, Nate. I still get a smile on my face every time I see that girl :-D.
seen it before
Thanks, Ezequiel. I was dead serious when I was making this :-)) I just finished the second version, thank you very much for the help!