Aljiro Creative Logo Draft 1

Hi, I think this font is a bit boring for logo use, have you tried others? The idea of the pen is nice, but the pen is now too small to notice - maybe a lot bigger "i" or the "i" as a separate icon or in different color than the rest of the text..?

I'll echo Miro's comments. The font could definitely be better.

I like your idea for the pen, but I wouldn't have guessed what it was without you telling me, so maybe work on that some more.

Great start!

really like the pen image, i got immediately what it was, as far as the font, have you tried decreasing the leading between each letter? it just feels a bit to spaced out for me.

Does this iPen :) need this white rectangular? Is it supposed to be a clip? Also, until I got to the iPen I got bored with the font.

...but it looks like just that, a start. Though the font is quite nice and the pen idea cool, you need to improve this concept.

First, you'll need to make it more compact, maybe try to split it in 2 lines.

I agree with Miro, this looks quiet plain and boring, you have to spice it up.

How this "i/pen" will look it you'll need to reduce the logo pretty much? Do you think it still be perceptible?

Play around a little more with this idea, it's a nice concept, you can poolish it a lot.

This isn't really working for me. The pencil is far too subtle and is kind of overdone. I would start fresh on this concept.