Ashe Abbott

New logo design for web design company

By Ashe Abbott

   on Apr 03, 2010
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  • Miro

    Miro

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    Suggestions...

    Posted on Apr 04, 2010 at 12:09 AM

    I would try how it looked with heavier typeface, in only one color and the road as a simpler icon left of the text. Or under the text, going in horizontal direction like the lines.

  • Joe Mulberry

    Joe Mulberry

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    Posted on Apr 04, 2010 at 12:14 AM

    This just isnt working for me...

    1. The road graphic is quite 'clip-arty'

    2. drop shadow is not subtle enough and its distance is too great.

    3. multi-coloured text is not great.

    I have found the hardest thing to design are logo's so keep trying. But if you have tried lots designs and scrapped them and still not getting it right.. you may want to ask yourself if this is the right path for you?

    good luck

    • Ashe Abbott
      Ashe Abbott commented:
      Posted: on Apr 04, 2010 at 12:19 AM

      Thanks, Joe. I appreciate your feedback. The scrapped logos are more about designing something that works for me personally, rather than the quality of the design.

  • Marq Cruz

    Marq Cruz

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    too much

    Posted on Apr 04, 2010 at 1:11 AM

    too much gradient. the image of the road could be separate to the text. also, might try 2 liner only and of different font weight.

  • Tamara Elphick

    Tamara Elphick

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    typeface

    Posted on Apr 04, 2010 at 4:27 PM

    i'm not keen on the shadow you have given the typeface and think that to make it stand out you simply need a bolder/thicker typeface (have you tried browsing dafont.com look under sans serif typefaces and you can download them for free) i think with a thicker typeface the word 'road' and 'studios' won't look so spaced out

    • Ashe Abbott
      Ashe Abbott commented:
      Posted: on Apr 04, 2010 at 4:48 PM

      Thanks Tamara! I've actually made the font thicker already...I should upload the new image. And, yep, that's where I got this font! Well, Font Space, but same thing. :D