Erkan MalçOk

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By Erkan MalçOk

   on Jul 18, 2009
5 Reviews5 Votes2 Favorites554 Views

Concept Reviews

  • Ashley Frasier

    Ashley Frasier

    Rank: 1 Elite

    52

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 5
    1 Vote
    Typography on caps and non-caps

    Posted on Jul 20, 2009 at 8:26 AM

    Awesome design! Love the color scheme, and absolutely love how you used the texture on the dark side and used that dark grey instead of a solid black. Very nice.

    The only thing I find to be a bit off is the choice of what you capitalized and what remained in lower case or normal case. Like the logo and the word "minus" and then it goes Design Studio. Really like that but then I look at the name ERKAN MALCOK and then graphic designer. This just may be me being picky but I think it would be interesting and more cluid to followe the style you have with your logo. Have the name all lower case and follow that through. It might even be interesting to follow this on the dark side as well. I see you have Creativity in all caps but it being white alone is such a great impact that I am not sure you were need the all caps there.

    But I think you have a really great design, love the color scheme and the typography really is great!

  • Kyle Reddoch

    Kyle Reddoch

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

    457

    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
    1 Vote
    Really Great

    Posted on Jul 20, 2009 at 2:40 PM

    I cant think of anything that you would need to change on this.

  • Tellesman

    Tellesman

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

    181

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    Nothing.

    Posted on Sep 03, 2009 at 3:24 PM

    Maybe it looks better in printed form but the textured background kind of takes away from the red font. If it works in print, then its a great design.

  • Sean Haney

    Sean Haney

    Rank: 4 Master

    123

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
    0 Votes
    The red text.....

    Posted on Jul 28, 2009 at 10:39 AM

    The red text above and below CREATIVITY seems to a bit blurred or fuzzy....Maybee that is what you were going for but it is just a bit hard to read. Other than that I think you ahave a great design!

  • Rachel Nelson

    Rachel Nelson

    Rank: 3 Superior

    167

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    watermark logo

    Posted on Aug 13, 2009 at 1:02 PM

    Your objective is clean, so to me this has too much detail with the textured black and the watermarked logo.

    I'm a bit confused with your logo as a plus when your company is called minus, it's distracting me from everything else - sorry I had to say.

    The contrast on the red and black doesn't seem good enough but I am viewing on a 10" laptop screen.

    The text on the light side could do with some tweaking not sure what you've done to your contact details but they don't look comfortable like your name and title do.

    I would move the web, branding, print and line much nearer to minus, they look like they are floating at the moment and not really belonging.

    Sorry this is a bit negative compared to your other reviews, but it is how I see it.