Miro

Ferry company, front page

By Miro

   on Mar 30, 2010
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  • Kirill Kedrinski

    Kirill Kedrinski

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

    1018

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
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    Posted on Mar 30, 2010 at 5:10 AM

    Now it is better i think! Try to do dark blue panel lighter for example like on site openrabota.ru and time not yellow but white and it will be very nice site i think!

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Mar 30, 2010 at 5:17 AM

      Thanks, Kirill! Unfortunately I can not change the blue, this is the company color. But maybe the yellow to white...

  • Michael + Webcardinals

    Michael + Webcardinals

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
    1 Vote
    Isn't booking the most important?

    Posted on Mar 30, 2010 at 6:15 AM

    Miro, this looks better, but I would think that booking is one of the most important elements apart of timetable on any ferry website :)

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    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Mar 30, 2010 at 6:21 AM

      Thanks, Michael for the note. But in this case it is not, there are no tickets that you could book beforehand. You just drive in.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    1 Vote
    Work on engagement

    Posted on Mar 30, 2010 at 8:32 AM

    I don't think this site is engaging enough. I think with some subtle shadows, strokes and maybe even a subtle background image this could be a lot more interesting. Right now it looks like you just plugged the information into a table.

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Mar 30, 2010 at 9:00 AM

      Thanks, Nate. Good suggestion, I´ll continue on this.

  • Gareth Daine

    Gareth Daine

    Rank: 5 Advanced

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
    1 Vote
    Timetable...

    Posted on Mar 30, 2010 at 8:42 AM

    Hi,

    The overall design looks like a generic template, from a cheap template website. No offence.

    The background colour on the timetable just doesn't fit together with the yellow text. I suggest lightening the colour as mentioned previously or maybe use the green you've used for the read more links with white text.

    I would make sure the 'READ MORE' links line up together, i.e. right align them all. It will look better. Looks a bit messy at the moment.

    How many pages will this website have? Is the navigation at the top a bit overkill?

    Also, really not sure about the blue text.

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Mar 30, 2010 at 9:04 AM

      Hi Gareth. If it looks like a cheap template it is a good thing that you say so, I just have to make it better. I have not made the web site structure yet, this time I started with making out a layout of the front page. (I just felt like it.. :-D ).

      Thank you for the suggestions.