Ezequiel Jaime

Logo for Facebook Game

By Ezequiel Jaime

   on Mar 27, 2010
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Concept Reviews

  • Miro

    Miro

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    very nice!

    Posted on Mar 28, 2010 at 12:43 AM

    At first I looked if the cats was a bit angry, but no - I think she is ok. Have you tried adding a gradient to the texts? That would really give it a Facebook-look. The "beta" could be on top of the "e".

    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 28, 2010 at 10:24 AM

      Hey there! Always very welcome your reviews, Miroman. I will play around a little bit with the beta and will tray some gradients too. Thanks!

    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 28, 2010 at 10:46 AM

      Added some grads!

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Mar 28, 2010 at 12:15 PM

      Yes, I like it more now, I tried to think of an explanation why I do but I don´t know why - I just do :-D Did you try the gradient on the "House" the other way around, I mean so that the darkest part would be at the bottom? The beta is fine now.

    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 28, 2010 at 12:22 PM

      I tried to make some increasing-decreasing effect, but you were so right, looks much better with gradients in same direction. Thanks a lot for your help!

  • Andy E

    Andy E

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    overlapping letters

    Posted on Mar 28, 2010 at 8:38 AM

    Great concept. I think the eyes behind the H is very creative and fits well with the game objective.

    The letter treatment is inconsistent in pet and house and even within house. The letters in pet don't overlap, but the right side of each letter in House overlap. Then, the S overlaps on both sides. Consider not overlapping any letters or overlapping on the right only.

    I'd move the beta under the O.

    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 28, 2010 at 10:25 AM

      Hello Andy, you have a really good point about the overlapping, I definetely have to fix. Thank you for notice that!

    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 28, 2010 at 10:46 AM

      I fixed the overlapping now, thank you!

  • bryanmichael

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    Well done!

    Posted on Mar 27, 2010 at 7:45 PM

    Great concept - fits the audience and it's fun.

    The only thing I would change is to move the "beta!". Right now it seems to read: pet beta house. Maybe sneak it next to the right hand side of the "H"?

    -b

    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 28, 2010 at 10:20 AM

      Hi Btyan, many thanks! I'll play around a little bit with the "beta!"

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    First one looks great

    Posted on Mar 29, 2010 at 8:24 AM

    The first one is really good, I like it. I would move "beta" somewhere else on the logo. You might even consider putting it on a starburst of some kind. Just a thought, good work though.

  • Bryan Mathews

    Bryan Mathews

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    first one is great

    Posted on Mar 29, 2010 at 5:03 PM

    I like the first one. There is more color difference between the two colors. The beta sign is also placed on a better place.

  • Javier

    Javier

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    colors

    Posted on Mar 31, 2010 at 3:17 AM

    this is a cool concept, it's clear enough, but I will suggest give more life to that orange, or what about red and blue??

    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 31, 2010 at 6:58 AM

      Why all 0s???? The colours are the 2 main colours of my client's company can't change that. Anyways, thank for your review... I guess.

    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 31, 2010 at 6:58 AM

      Why all 0s???? The colours are the 2 main colours of my client's company can't change that. Anyways, thank for your review... I guess.

  • Ashe Abbott

    Ashe Abbott

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    Colors, maybe?

    Posted on Mar 27, 2010 at 8:15 PM

    Great design, though I'm not a fan of the colors. This logo will really work for Facebook. :D

    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 28, 2010 at 10:22 AM

      Thanks a lot Ashee! Maybe the orange could be a little bit happier, but I think I should keep the brown

    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 28, 2010 at 10:50 AM

      Maybe some gradients, as Miro suggested will do the job. What do you think about latest update, Ashe?

    • Ashe Abbott
      Ashe Abbott commented:
      Posted: on Mar 28, 2010 at 4:39 PM

      Hi Ezequiel! Much better with the gradients and new shade of orange! Awesome! :D

  • Kirill Kedrinski

    Kirill Kedrinski

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    Posted on Mar 29, 2010 at 12:16 AM

    I like it)) second most of all

  • David Desquiens

    David Desquiens

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    Seems weird to me the two differents "e" But great color on first