Alan Horne

Mint Teeth Whitening design v2

By Alan Horne

   on Mar 25, 2010
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  • Miranda Sehl

    Miranda Sehl

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    saturation of girl's face

    Posted on Mar 25, 2010 at 3:29 PM

    i like the adjustments you've made so far~ this is looking completely appropriate for it's purpose. i would say the girl's face is really red & saturated, my screens here are good indicators of color & saturation, i took a screen shot into photoshop and brought her saturation down and it looked good between -30 & -50 from what she's at now.

    the logo area might have too much green now.. maybe try making "Teeth whitening" gray..

    the 3 products boxes.. the images seem like they will be ity-bity.. maybe you could show one at a time, allowing more space for each to be featured well.

    you're moving in the right direction~ good work :)

  • ploni almoni

    ploni almoni

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    contrast

    Posted on Mar 25, 2010 at 3:50 PM

    More contrast... its look vary fade

  • Neil McNally

    Neil McNally

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    Punch it up

    Posted on Mar 25, 2010 at 6:27 PM

    I find it too muted and needs more contrast

  • Micah

    Micah

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    Great

    Posted on Mar 25, 2010 at 10:47 PM

    But Hard To Read With The Background

  • Kirill Kedrinski

    Kirill Kedrinski

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    Posted on Mar 25, 2010 at 11:36 PM

    I like it. Still have no words to say.

  • Yasmin Faisal

    Yasmin Faisal

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    Nothing I like it very much!

    Posted on Mar 26, 2010 at 7:48 AM

    I like the concept (the blue one that is!) ...... very cool and very refreshing. Reminds me of minty fresh mouthwash ....which is a good thing I hope since the site is about teeth.

    I esp like the raised corners....and have been trying to achieve that effect with drop shadows etc...but I haven't had much success, any tips?

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Love the 2nd design

    Posted on Mar 26, 2010 at 8:03 AM

    I really like the design in the green color. Looks super clean and simple. I really like what you have, not much I would change. Just align the logo all the way the left. Great work!

  • Luca Innocenti

    Luca Innocenti

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    I'll insert some incisive in the green layout

    Posted on Mar 27, 2010 at 8:40 AM

    i like the green version a lot, the only thing i don't like is the choose of the monochrome.

    I think you can use another color to underline the main concept and the objective of the site. Now the thing more visible in the layout is the girl (green layout) is that your objective?Or is the MORE? Where you want that i click??

  • Alex B

    Alex B

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    more contrast

    Posted on Mar 27, 2010 at 5:14 PM

    more contrast

  • Swami Trika

    Swami Trika

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    Add more contrast to the Blue version

    Posted on Mar 25, 2010 at 1:04 PM

    Like the blue best, because it plays with the Green somewhat. However, would like to see a little more variation on shades of blue, some highlights of darker blue, perhaps in the top menu or background? Top menu is getting a little lost.

  • Miro

    Miro

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    background of the image

    Posted on Mar 25, 2010 at 1:56 PM

    Hi, have you tried giving the image a background? So that the only thing white in the picture would be her shining smile. And also because I think this design lacks colors.

    I like the green version more, but it needs more blue. Maybe that wave in the background should be darker? Or a blue bg with a white wave.