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Concept Reviews
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Hey Miro!
The colour scheme you selected for this layout is perfect. The design is really cool, the only thing is making me some noise is the girl on the BG, she doesn't look as cool as your site.
The rest it's just perfect, awesome job!
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Miro
Nce one, looks great my only thing is the splatter, it looks like foundation splattered...I'd get rid of that and make use of more cutting edges...
Overall a great Job!
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Miro commented:Aaran, thank you! I am already working on a new version with different kind of splatters.
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I like photo and i like effects. Looks so modern easy and fresh. I have no thoughts about improving. Maybe more readable black title
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I really enjoy the overlapping boxes behind the text. the spatter effect is making me think more of makeup than hair. ...and this girl's hair doesn't really look great also her necklace is a bit distracting.
I think that the look will appeal to young girls. I would say that it does look: 'now' ...so good job :) i suggest finding a new picture & effect though for the background.
- you have two different styles of the "avant garde" which is the logo? maybe you need to finalize that and stick to one on this page. i do really like your style, nice work~
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Miro commented:
Thank you, Miranda!!! The girl will change as this is chosen by me and the client will have to choose one that has a proper hair cut (I don´t know a thing about that, I am bald ;-D).
Logo-Avantgarde is the one close to the menu. I thought overall not to go with the style that the logo has, and the client is also happy with that. But maybe I should break the another Avantgarde more in pieces, so it wouldn´t interfere with the Logo-Avantgarde.
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hey Miro
I like the colors use. what is the website for? also what is the txt in the pink box in the middle?
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Miro commented:
Hi Julio! This website is for my friend´s hair salon, promoting it for the clients. The text in the middle tells about the Avantgarde, what it is, where it is, what they do, what hair products they use and also that they have a "KC Shop"-shop for selling the hair products.
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First I'd like to say that I agree with miranda sehl, I like the colors and the composition, but when I first saw it, I think think hair salon. Maybe try pictures with more fludity and maybe a bit of a darker color composition. Also you might want to try something other than the spashes, I dont think they serve any purpose here. and last, try different fonts, maybe san-serifs.
Good start!!....keep it up!
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miro,
i like the overlapping boxes, but wondering how you will keep the changing line length look for visitors with large text settings? How will you manage the overflow and the change in line height and varying lengths?
I agreed with previous comments about make-up splash changing the emphasis of the product. Although, i really like the effect.
With the double logo's what about breaking apart the logo in the header?
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Miro commented:
You are of course right, that can not be done. I´ll fix that in the next version. Also the splashes are different now and I have removed the "second logo".
Thank you !!
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Thank you so much, Ezequiel!
PS The colors are based of Pantone´s color trends predictions ;-) .