Dan Allen Pantinople

DJ Moises

By Dan Allen Pantinople

   on Mar 23, 2010
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  • Miro

    Miro

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    second page

    Posted on Mar 23, 2010 at 10:42 AM

    Lol, I was thinking he is a dj and was wondering what the ... is this :-D

    But very well done, I like especially the front page. Not so much fan of the big picture and the yellow boxes under it on the following page.

  • Michael + Webcardinals

    Michael + Webcardinals

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
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    Trinity?

    Posted on Mar 23, 2010 at 10:53 AM

    It's definitely original, and if it is your second approach to webdesign you have potential :)

    Few issues:

    1. Why 3 people if this is Mr DJ Moises personal site?

    2. I would use blog as a homepage with profile as a sub-page. It's important what this guy has to say and if people like it they will check who he is.

    3. Nobody will read this solid text block at the bottom. Use icons of companies he worked for and separate different subjects. Short sentences are better than these spaghetti :)

    4. footer statistics is so 1998 :)

    Keep with a good work!

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Mar 23, 2010 at 4:53 PM

      DJ Moises are all three :)

      but its a valid point - do you just need one?

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Mar 23, 2010 at 4:54 PM

      maybe you are right! they are 3 different people!!! how weird!

    • Dan Allen Pantinople
      Posted: on Mar 23, 2010 at 6:35 PM

      thanks for that review..! well my client wanted to use that pic, i wanted to use the solo...i think he wants to establish that he is a team leader or something..^_^

    • Michael + Webcardinals
      Posted: on Mar 23, 2010 at 6:38 PM

      It looks now like a commercial site not a personal one.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    • Design: 2
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    Not my fave

    Posted on Mar 23, 2010 at 11:27 AM

    Honestly, this isn't working very well for me. I know you may have some client specifications that is dragging this down, but it feels a little cheesy, dated and misaligned in a couple of areas.

    Please don't take this as me putting you down, just trying to be honest with the feedback. I like the simplicity of the design, but I think the images of the guys are really adding to the cheese factor. Also, the navigation at the top should be simpler to go along with the design. On the inner pages you have put the logo below the nav and it kind of gets lost, bring more attention to it.

    Now those are all my thoughts, but at the same time they don't really mean anything since you have already gotten the client approval. The client rules here and if he likes the design, I say go with it. Make sense, let me know if you have questions.

  • S. Preston Chuhon

    S. Preston Chuhon

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
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    • Originality: 4
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    Color combinations not working.

    Posted on Mar 23, 2010 at 1:53 PM

    Blue, Yellow and white aren't working together. It's got too much flair, for a corporate site.

    Yellow sidebar with blue border isn't right. Try something more solid like the title... that is very strong!

  • David Bohórquez

    David Bohórquez

    Rank: 7 Student

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
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    Profile info design

    Posted on Mar 23, 2010 at 2:14 PM

    I really like the front page. I'll remove the Updated on and the visits counter. I don't think they really add something to the user experience.

    Also, the profile info is too long and it kind of destroy the minimalistic feeling of the front page. You could use icons or the logos from the companies mentioned there.

    This also goes for the yellow box in the second page. The yellow doesn't really invites to read the info. I think that info could go better in the main content section.

    The rest of it works great for me. Keep it up!

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Mar 23, 2010 at 4:56 PM

      agree with the 'updated' and visitors counter, as they look a bit 1990's

    • Dan Allen Pantinople
      Posted: on Mar 23, 2010 at 6:38 PM

      yah, agree with you 100%..but my client really wanted to put those two in the front page because he thinks its very necessary...thanks for the review..^_^

  • Naveen Hariprasad

    Naveen Hariprasad

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
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    Give the user some starting point...

    Posted on Mar 23, 2010 at 2:54 PM

    I appreciate the originality of the design but I would rather see the descriptive, linked text moved to the top, maybe aligned to the right of the image. This way the text will stand some chance of being read (and therefore clicked) once the user looks at the faces of the photos, which will no doubt grab attention. Also, the yellow on blue does not work well, but this may be due to the screenshot quality. I like the idea, but try something different with it.

  • Kirill Kedrinski

    Kirill Kedrinski

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

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    • Design: 3
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    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
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    .

    Posted on Mar 23, 2010 at 11:45 PM

    Try to transform it now to modern style of web 2.0 Play with colors. Now i like photo but colors and corners aren`t so nice.

  • Ryan Elliott

    Ryan Elliott

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
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    interesting...

    Posted on Mar 24, 2010 at 12:01 AM

    Not a bad job at all on your 2nd attempt at web design, much better than mine. This is what I found:

    1. I don't get the whole dj thing, is that his 1st name?
    2. What's with the 3 people if its just him?
    3. I would just make the image above the yellow nav smaller that might help.

    Great job again on your 2nd go around!