Ezequiel Jaime

pFusion Logo

By Ezequiel Jaime

   on Mar 21, 2010
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  • Miro

    Miro

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    Very good

    Posted on Mar 22, 2010 at 1:11 AM

    It looks very good, though I am still wondering how it would look fully hand drawn...

    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 23, 2010 at 10:02 AM

      Hi Miro, I think I should try that aswell but I'm a little lazy, lol. Thanks for the review!

  • Usman Sheikh

    Usman Sheikh

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    The dot for the letter "i"

    Posted on Mar 22, 2010 at 2:36 AM

    I really like the logo. Awesome stuff!

    The only thing that seems a bit out of place is the dot of the letter "i". Maybe you want to bring it down a little. I know at the moment it is aligned with the letter "f".

    Just a suggestion nonetheless. It looks awesome the way it is as well.

  • Miranda Sehl

    Miranda Sehl

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    un-fuse s&i maybe..

    Posted on Mar 23, 2010 at 9:04 AM

    good job on fusing the colors in each letter~ thats a major improvement and completes your idea visually. that s is much better and im glad you're keeping the dot on the i, it was hard to read without it.

    i wonder what it would look like if the s and i were disconnected. the connection seems a bit forced.. our f & u are fused... maybe thats enough? just something to consider. i tried disconnecting them and moving the dot on the i down like others suggested.. i dont really mind it being up high where you've got it though. whatever you do, it looks lovely already.

    you've made a really great logo that I'm sure will appeal to your target audience :)

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    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 23, 2010 at 10:10 AM

      Miranda! It's always a pleasure to see your ideas, but this time I feel the S looks a little bit weird or incomplete.

      Regarding the dot, perhaps you and many people are right about its position. Thank you!!!

  • Elly James

    Elly James

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    more color

    Posted on Mar 21, 2010 at 1:39 PM

    i love the gradient in the colors...not sure i like it as a text shadow...maybe more effective as a background...like a big splash of color in the background.

  • Kirill Kedrinski

    Kirill Kedrinski

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    nothing

    Posted on Mar 21, 2010 at 9:21 PM

    now i like it fully! maybe it is one of the best works i ever seen! Congratulations)) Very strong idea!

  • Marq Cruz

    Marq Cruz

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    very nice

    Posted on Mar 21, 2010 at 9:52 PM

    very creative indeed. I like it.

  • Julia New

    Julia New

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    Nothing.

    Posted on Mar 23, 2010 at 9:54 AM

    I like the dot over the i. It makes it more bold, sort of like an exclamation point. The colors are incredible and will make the brand very recognizable and appealing to women of all ages.

  • Dan Allen Pantinople

    Dan Allen Pantinople

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    very nice!!

    Posted on Mar 23, 2010 at 7:07 PM

    i love what you've done with it..! couldnt have done it better myself..^_^

  • Fabio Duó

    Fabio Duó

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    Very good

    Posted on Mar 24, 2010 at 9:57 AM

    Nothing to add, great logo

  • Maurizio Ruggiero

    Maurizio Ruggiero

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    good job

    Posted on Mar 24, 2010 at 12:12 PM

    I like it !!!

  • anjali bhatia

    anjali bhatia

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    add some more colour, black is too dominating

    Posted on Mar 25, 2010 at 1:31 AM

    fusion is a mix a colors. one needs to add more color to this. Black is dominating the design.

  • Marko Kolar

    Marko Kolar

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    nice

    Posted on Mar 25, 2010 at 2:46 PM

    i really like combination of simple lines and light brushes. i have notihing more to write... it's fine :)

    • Jelena Rakic
      Jelena Rakic commented:
      Posted: on Mar 26, 2010 at 6:21 AM

      Think about how it will fit on different clothes...

  • Michal L

    Michal L

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    Nothing

    Posted on Mar 26, 2010 at 7:53 AM

    Simple and clean. Not to much colors. I like that.

  • alexandra Marcelo

    alexandra Marcelo

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    the "p"

    Posted on Apr 12, 2010 at 6:50 PM

    If any, i would change the "P". it´s a litle confusing at first. "fusion" absolutly stands out.

    but to say the truth i love everything about it. Young, fresh, happy .. just as a woman should feel .

    congratulations.

  • Michael Gunner

    Michael Gunner

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    Change the s and the n

    Posted on Apr 22, 2010 at 11:12 AM

    I like the idea, but the s looks really out of place. I also feel the n almost looks like a backward r.

    The colour is a nice idea too, but maybe it would be better if it was actually on the text?

  • Alex Collins

    Alex Collins

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    Font

    Posted on Apr 24, 2010 at 7:10 PM

    I think the logo is great - i just cant for the life of me see it associated with a women's clothing brand. To me it would work more as a creative software logo or something. Im probably totally wrong as I'm a guy but just doesn't seem to tie in with the conventions of women's clothing. I love what you've done with it though - i guess i'll just have to be proved wrong when i see it on promo stuff and things :)

  • Jamie Telin

    Jamie Telin

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    Perfect!

    Posted on Jul 07, 2010 at 4:57 AM

    Just perfect.

  • Haider Ali

    Haider Ali

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    nice fusion

    Posted on Mar 22, 2010 at 3:06 AM

    this really very nice and engaging, however, I think dot used for i seems a bit out of place or may be try without dot.

    overall its great work.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    I like it

    Posted on Mar 22, 2010 at 7:55 PM

    This is good work, I think I can finally say that I like it. It's simple, colorful, readable and different. i kind of wonder what this would like without the swirls and just using gradients on the actual text...just a thought. Great work!

    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 23, 2010 at 10:04 AM

      Hi Nate,

      I think I'll start crying of joy... I'm pretty sure 99% of the people here wants to get a good review from you and that's not easy. That's my first and I appreciate it!

    • Nate Hamilton
      Nate Hamilton commented:
      Posted: on Mar 23, 2010 at 10:14 AM

      hehe, well you deserved it here. Good work listening to feedback and pushing through!

  • Austin Pierce

    Austin Pierce

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    Concept

    Posted on Mar 22, 2010 at 9:41 PM

    I would try something that appears a little more feminine.

  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    Wowzers

    Posted on Mar 22, 2010 at 10:26 PM

    Looks awesome great job!

  • Adam Gold

    Adam Gold

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    Incomplete

    Posted on Mar 23, 2010 at 1:44 AM

    I like the logo, although the splashes near the letters looks a bit incomplete..

    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 23, 2010 at 10:07 AM

      Hi Adam, thanks for your review. On very first version of this logo, the swirls were more complex but people feedback said it was hard to read that's why I minimize them now. Anyways, thanks!

  • Nathan Lebreton

    Nathan Lebreton

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    love it

    Posted on Mar 23, 2010 at 6:27 AM

    nothig to say i LOVE IT ! damn, why i don't make this before ^^