Joe Mulberry

Template for Personal Project

By Joe Mulberry

   on Mar 21, 2010
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  • Elly James

    Elly James

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    2 Votes
    logo distracts from navigation

    Posted on Mar 21, 2010 at 9:41 AM

    maybe reverse the colors...so for MOJOE.5 use the faded colors that you use on the navigation, and then for the navigation use the bright white text color. Otherwise absolutely love the look of this!

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Mar 21, 2010 at 11:31 PM

      thanks elly!

      have a look at the new version with added content

      http://www.conceptfeedback.com/concept/2828/index-for-personal-project/

      would appreciate your thoughts again

  • Miro

    Miro

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    very good

    Posted on Mar 21, 2010 at 9:58 AM

    Very nice start, now us some content! :-)

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Mar 21, 2010 at 11:32 PM

      Content is now there for you Miro :)

      have a look at the new version

      http://www.conceptfeedback.com/concept/2828/index-for-personal-project/

      would appreciate your thoughts again

  • Marq Cruz

    Marq Cruz

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    very nice

    Posted on Mar 21, 2010 at 7:30 PM

    its nice you have take noted our observation and comment to your work. Now, this colorful and reflects your site.great job. But take note also the first comment about your menus. G'luck!

  • Julius Koroll

    Julius Koroll

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    Highlight the menu a bit

    Posted on Mar 21, 2010 at 7:53 AM

    Oh, this is one of the nicest works you did here at CF! I'm not sure, if this is a menu under your name or if those points try to highlight your skills. After I saw "about me" it was clear to me but I think either you have to change the colors of the menu to those of the LETTERS or try a more "typical" way of menu like "start, blog , skills" and stuff. Really good work and choose of colours!

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Mar 21, 2010 at 8:02 AM

      thanks julius!

      Your point is very valid, its easy to think that a menu is a menu when you are designing a menu :) maybe if i put about me as the first link then people will think it is a menu...? Also, on hover the links will change their opacity slightly which should hint to them more.? I think that although it is simple, it is memorable and distinctive which is pleasing.

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Mar 21, 2010 at 11:32 PM

      Julius

      have a look at the new version with added content

      http://www.conceptfeedback.com/concept/2828/index-for-personal-project/

      would appreciate your thoughts again

  • Kirill Kedrinski

    Kirill Kedrinski

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
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    Posted on Mar 21, 2010 at 9:23 PM

    Good start but want to see it completed

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Mar 21, 2010 at 11:32 PM

      Kirill

      have a look at the new version with added content

      http://www.conceptfeedback.com/concept/2828/index-for-personal-project/

      would appreciate your thoughts again