Chris Sparks

secureview halfpage

By Chris Sparks

   on Jul 17, 2009
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Concept Reviews

  • Brian Caicco

    Brian Caicco

    Rank: 1 Elite

    2234

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
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    the cctv media

    Posted on Jul 17, 2009 at 11:45 AM

    The cctv media is pulls my attention away from the secure view title. Is it supposed to be that way? The title seems a bit to big to be readable.

    The fonts are working well and i like the colors but The subtext could be split into two lines and left justified with a flipped image. I'd make the after the word and.

  • Kyle Reddoch

    Kyle Reddoch

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

    457

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    CCTV Media

    Posted on Jul 20, 2009 at 3:03 PM

    I have to agree with Brian. The first thing my eyes were drawn to was the cctv media section.

    Especially the "M". I would move that to the very right hand bottom and scale it down some.

    Other than that, it is really good.

  • Joshua Pratt

    Joshua Pratt

    Rank: 3 Superior

    219

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 1
    0 Votes
    Get rid of the text on the beach!!!

    Posted on Aug 01, 2009 at 11:07 PM

    As already stated, the cctv Media is highly distracting mot to mention the typeface and colors don't really go with anything else in the design. I would say move it or lose it. It also doesn't help that everything else is on a perpendicular grid and it is diagonal. Maybe it's just me but it really bothers me that the "S" in Secure is barely touching the grass. You may want to try moving it over some. Also look at your kerning in the word "Secure" it doesn't match the rest. I like the color scheme but try moving some things around. Maybe even mover your contact information to a different location. It's a start but keep playing with it.

  • Daniel Zerkowitz

    Daniel Zerkowitz

    Rank: 3 Superior

    224

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
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    cctv Media

    Posted on Aug 24, 2009 at 7:26 AM

    There are two things that ruin the concept. The cctv Media bit in the sand looks poorly photoshopped. Second is the type of News, Views, etc. It looks squashed!