I like it. Just an idea, you could "flip" his head to look at the right side ("forward" for left-to-right readers), instead of "backward"
This is so creative and soulful - it's lovely to looks at and has such a great visual impact!
The images, typography, and colours flow really well. Great job!
i would like to listen to the music before saying that i like this concept. but it is visually pleasing and ill trust that the concept matches the style and mood of the music. i think that the minimal approach is nice. i would say it could be even more so and not loose anything by removing the tree branch from the bottom left. i agree with jamie's suggestion to use a horizontal text line for the artist's name. nice job ~ the color is an interesting and appealing choice
Remove the tree and wire, and add more flying birds. The idea is great! Hmm... but why his head is broken, does it need to be? Maybe only in the lower section near the birds?
I like it I just dont know about the pink. Its really girl and doesn't go with the eerieness of the card. I would even say b&w.
I think it is great)) Change nothing. I like this minimalism and philosophic idea))
But, perhaps, even if I like the name vertical i would do it horizontal. I don't know, just makes it feel even more epic.
I'm not sure of the meaning behind him turning into birds but the imagery is fantastic. Great colors, images and idea, very well done!
That's what I love about critiques: having people's perspectives.
Actually, Nate, it is the other way around, or better saying: the viewer will tell how he/she sees it. It is his "voice" turning into birds. I am from Brazil and there is a saying that says: He or she has a bird's voice. My friend told me that in the US the Americans have similar thinking. So, the idea was of connecting his voice with the singing of birds.
Thank you very much for the feedback.
Thanks for the suggestion. I didn't even thought about it.
Much appreciated.