Marcio Cabral

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By Marcio Cabral

   on Mar 17, 2010
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Concept Reviews

  • Marius Stuparu

    Marius Stuparu

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    Not much to change

    Posted on Mar 18, 2010 at 8:36 AM

    I like it. Just an idea, you could "flip" his head to look at the right side ("forward" for left-to-right readers), instead of "backward"

    • Marcio Cabral
      Marcio Cabral commented:
      Posted: on Mar 18, 2010 at 9:39 AM

      Thanks for the suggestion. I didn't even thought about it.

      Much appreciated.

  • Serina Patterson

    Serina Patterson

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    • Design: 5
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    Lovely

    Posted on Mar 18, 2010 at 10:54 AM

    This is so creative and soulful - it's lovely to looks at and has such a great visual impact!

    The images, typography, and colours flow really well. Great job!

    • Marcio Cabral
      Marcio Cabral commented:
      Posted: on Mar 18, 2010 at 12:47 PM

      Thank you very much, Serina. I love the color, too.

  • Miranda Sehl

    Miranda Sehl

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    remove the tree branches

    Posted on Mar 18, 2010 at 11:01 AM

    i would like to listen to the music before saying that i like this concept. but it is visually pleasing and ill trust that the concept matches the style and mood of the music. i think that the minimal approach is nice. i would say it could be even more so and not loose anything by removing the tree branch from the bottom left. i agree with jamie's suggestion to use a horizontal text line for the artist's name. nice job ~ the color is an interesting and appealing choice

  • Miro

    Miro

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    tree

    Posted on Mar 18, 2010 at 3:33 PM

    Remove the tree and wire, and add more flying birds. The idea is great! Hmm... but why his head is broken, does it need to be? Maybe only in the lower section near the birds?

    • D. Zunic
      D. Zunic commented:
      Posted: on Mar 24, 2010 at 2:21 PM

      I like it I just dont know about the pink. Its really girl and doesn't go with the eerieness of the card. I would even say b&w.

  • Kirill Kedrinski

    Kirill Kedrinski

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    0 Votes
    Great!

    Posted on Mar 17, 2010 at 10:51 PM

    I think it is great)) Change nothing. I like this minimalism and philosophic idea))

  • Jamie Telin

    Jamie Telin

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
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    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    Not much to change...

    Posted on Mar 18, 2010 at 4:01 AM

    But, perhaps, even if I like the name vertical i would do it horizontal. I don't know, just makes it feel even more epic.

    • jerome.jpg
    • Marcio Cabral
      Marcio Cabral commented:
      Posted: on Mar 18, 2010 at 7:22 AM

      Than you Jamie, I will give it a try and show it to Jerome.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    • Design: 5
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    • Originality: 5
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    0 Votes
    Looks great!

    Posted on Mar 18, 2010 at 8:03 AM

    I'm not sure of the meaning behind him turning into birds but the imagery is fantastic. Great colors, images and idea, very well done!

    • Marcio Cabral
      Marcio Cabral commented:
      Posted: on Mar 18, 2010 at 9:34 AM

      That's what I love about critiques: having people's perspectives.

      Actually, Nate, it is the other way around, or better saying: the viewer will tell how he/she sees it. It is his "voice" turning into birds. I am from Brazil and there is a saying that says: He or she has a bird's voice. My friend told me that in the US the Americans have similar thinking. So, the idea was of connecting his voice with the singing of birds.

      Thank you very much for the feedback.