Mateusz Staniszewski

Beetle Car

By Mateusz Staniszewski

   on Mar 16, 2010
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  • Tony Tet

    Tony Tet

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    Nice

    Posted on Mar 16, 2010 at 2:00 PM

    I agree with Nate there about the shadow and adding it on the portfolio.

    One more thing though, shouldn't the beetle be leaning on it's left seeing as the blade is sloping that way? Just a thought otherwise like the idea.

    • Codedude
      Codedude commented:
      Posted: on Mar 16, 2010 at 3:14 PM

      good point...I agree with you about the leaning car

  • Raymond Swart

    Raymond Swart

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    get a better image of the car

    Posted on Mar 17, 2010 at 3:48 AM

    the concept id great but would still need alot of work before you could pass it off as a finished product, your levels could do with some work to make sure the colors are in the same range, i.e. the beetle seems brighter than the blades and the fairy dust is a bit of an over kill. would be cool if there was an actual beetle somewhere in there albeit small and blurred or something. But other wise I still like the concept well done!

  • Andy E

    Andy E

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    placement of the car

    Posted on Mar 17, 2010 at 9:52 AM

    I'd move the car more toward the center, but don't center it. It's so far to the right that the folded blade of grass is the focal point. Nice concept.

  • Nate Hamilton

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    • Design: 3
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    Not bad

    Posted on Mar 16, 2010 at 12:35 PM

    The imagery is pretty cool, I would lessen the shadow underneath the car. I'm also not sure about using this as a portfolio piece. I would have to see it in action to say whether it works or not.