Noel Tock

Grungy WP Theme!

By Noel Tock

   on Mar 15, 2010
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  • Neal Chester

    Neal Chester

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    Nothing

    Posted on Mar 15, 2010 at 4:29 PM

    Total awesomeness.

  • Marcio Cabral

    Marcio Cabral

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    Logo should be more on the bright side

    Posted on Mar 15, 2010 at 4:43 PM

    Really well done and refined grunge f*%#@ up site.

    The textures are just clean cut and refined metal. I touched my screen and felt the rust on the metal on the tips of my fingers.

    The old broken glass in one of the boxes is amazing, beautiful color scheme, nice text placement.

    The only thing is the logo, it gets a little lost at the top, but since you are still working on it...you might consider this suggestion.

    • Noel Tock
      Noel Tock commented:
      Posted: on Mar 16, 2010 at 5:08 PM

      Thanks Marcio, much appreciated!

      (The logo is only a placeholder)

  • Uwe Klinger

    Uwe Klinger

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    Nothing

    Posted on Mar 15, 2010 at 4:52 PM

    I love it! It's like you can almost feel the metal-surface.. Well maybe the name in the logo is a bit hard to read.. but that's my only critics.

    • Noel Tock
      Noel Tock commented:
      Posted: on Mar 16, 2010 at 5:09 PM

      Thank you Uwe!

      (The logo is only a placeholder)

  • Andy E

    Andy E

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    add another color

    Posted on Mar 15, 2010 at 7:10 PM

    Nice start Noel. It's definitely got a grunge look and I like the structure of the header. You left the content area alone, which is good, but I think 1 or 2 point sizes larger could suit well for the legibility of the text.

    I think this needs another color to make this a little more lively and engaging. Perhaps the tint in the main layout could be changed slightly, which would make it pop-out more from the black/gray background. To help this sell, I'd also include a bright, contrasting color to the logo area.

    • Noel Tock
      Noel Tock commented:
      Posted: on Mar 16, 2010 at 5:10 PM

      Thanks Andy! Another color is definitely an idea, I'll play with it.

  • Serina Patterson

    Serina Patterson

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    Readability for Social Media Items

    Posted on Mar 15, 2010 at 7:14 PM

    wow Noel - this is an amazing design! I love your clever use of metal and grunge texture; it clearly show you are a skilled and conscientious designer :)

    This site reads "gaming", and more specifically a FPS, without question. The only thing I can see that might help is to increase readability for the "tweets", "retweets", and right sidebar text. I agree with Marcio and Uwe that the logo is a tad dark - perhaps changing the text colour to a lighter grey or silver mght help.

    Cheers, Serina

    • Noel Tock
      Noel Tock commented:
      Posted: on Mar 16, 2010 at 5:11 PM

      Thank you Serina! I'll give the social media icons another shot, I'm not fully convinced either.

      (The logo is only a placeholder)

  • Az Razali

    Az Razali

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    Nothing

    Posted on Mar 15, 2010 at 10:51 PM

    Good.

  • Raymond Swart

    Raymond Swart

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    I really like the design and you probably have hit the nail on the head with your concept/design.

  • Waleed Eissa

    Waleed Eissa

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    Logo and search box

    Posted on Mar 16, 2010 at 2:54 AM

    Great design but as others have already indicated, the text in the logo is unreadable (actually I only knew there was text in the logo when I read other reviews). Same applies to the search box and also the post date (below the post title). Probably you can use the same color used for the links for the text in the logo and the search box.

    Great job!

    • Noel Tock
      Noel Tock commented:
      Posted: on Mar 16, 2010 at 5:13 PM

      Thanks Waleed! The search box definitely needs improvement...

      (The logo is only a placeholder)

  • Gytis Ceglys

    Gytis Ceglys

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    Metal

    Posted on Mar 16, 2010 at 8:15 AM

    i like metal texture. great job noel!

  • Kirill Kedrinski

    Kirill Kedrinski

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    good

    Posted on Mar 16, 2010 at 9:40 AM

    very realistic work. For me is hard but i like it

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Too dark

    Posted on Mar 16, 2010 at 12:12 PM

    I really like where this is headed, but it feels entirely too dark. Maybe add some rust color in there to lighten things up a bit? You need something that differentiates the page from the background more. Also, you can barely see the logo. Good work though, this should be a good one!

    • Noel Tock
      Noel Tock commented:
      Posted: on Mar 16, 2010 at 5:14 PM

      Thanks Nate! Not sure if I'm giving up the dark :) But we'll see...

      (The logo is only a placeholder)

  • Codedude

    Codedude

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    W.O.W

    Posted on Mar 16, 2010 at 3:24 PM

    wow...this is just stunning. Super cool "life-like" elements. Did you make those yourself? I still in amazement...

    Ok...here's some tips 1. Logo is hardly visible at all 2. sidebar text is also hard to read 3. Footer is rather empty 4. What about adding some bullet holes in the metal? :D

    Again...awesome

    • Noel Tock
      Noel Tock commented:
      Posted: on Mar 16, 2010 at 5:15 PM

      Thanks CodeDude! I've got some bullet holes in some layers, but not sure if I want to make it gaming exclusive yet :)

      (The logo is only a placeholder)

  • Mark Aplet

    Mark Aplet

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    Keep working the typography

    Posted on Mar 16, 2010 at 4:28 PM

    I like amount of detail in the interface with the grungy textures and such, but it totally falls flat in the typography department. I would like to see you spend some more time on the typography and really hit a home run.

    • Noel Tock
      Noel Tock commented:
      Posted: on Mar 16, 2010 at 5:15 PM

      Thanks Mark, any specific typography issues? Cheers

  • Mathias Hofman Laursen

    Mathias Hofman Laursen

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    A biiiit too dark maybe

    Posted on Mar 17, 2010 at 9:50 AM

    I get the idea of the darkness thing - but maybe lightening up some key areas would make the whole thing easier to navigate within

  • Anne-Marie R

    Anne-Marie R

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    I love it!

    Posted on Mar 18, 2010 at 11:16 AM

    I love this design. I'm a big fan of dark designs and this one is great! The search box could stand out more, but awesome job overall!

  • G. Ibacache

    G. Ibacache

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    searchbox

    Posted on Mar 19, 2010 at 7:32 PM

    Make the search box brighter. overall you are really talented. congratulations!

  • Stephanie Smith

    Stephanie Smith

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    Add contrast

    Posted on Mar 20, 2010 at 6:48 AM

    Really nice, I think it would be great for a gamer's blog or something similar. My only comment would be to add a bit of contrast between the page and the background texture. It blends in together just a bit too much. Otherwise great job.

  • Corinne Ducusin

    Corinne Ducusin

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    Nothing - everybody else has covered my concerns.

    Posted on Mar 20, 2010 at 2:50 PM

    My concerns being the search box and possible addition of color.

    You always seem to create quite an atmosphere with your web designs. Honestly, this is great! You have a variety of textures making the design more realistic but another concern I have is load time. Do you think all these different textures might affect the load time?

  • Sarah Sillitoe

    Sarah Sillitoe

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    A little fluidity somewhere?

    Posted on Mar 21, 2010 at 5:55 PM

    I really like your design! I think that if you could up the contrast a little and somehow add in a bit of a "swiggle" somewhere near the last third right hand side of the page it would improve it. On the metal bit, not sure what, rivit swirl design?

  • Samwize Magee

    Samwize Magee

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    Not so dark..

    Posted on Mar 22, 2010 at 12:49 AM

    A very dark feeling