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Concept Reviews
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Overall I think it's a very nice design and I can't think of much to suggest changing.
I gave a 4/5 for originality because of the sun rays in the header. I feel they're are overused these days.
The red ribbon works better than the blue one I think. It helps bring more colour to the design.
Maybe in the 'Other ways...' section you should tick all the boxes (or none).
One last thing I suggest changing is the colour of the links. I know links are supposed to be easily recognisable but they stand out too much. Maybe just remove the bold from them instead.
Nice job on the design. It looks really well!
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Neal Chester commented:
I toned down the vibrancy of the links, I think it works now. What would you suggest in place of the sun-rays in the background's header?
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Nice work here. It's simple enough, but has a good mixture of elements to give it character. The red ribbon definitely aids the design - in fact, I'd try to add more red and a little less blue. Although the color of the ribbon helps this stand out, I'd add a very small drop shadow, and extend the left end of the ribbon off the page and angle the backside up or down to create some depth (and make it appear as though it goes behind the page).
As for the pictures, this works, although I'd make each angle unique (it looks like the 1st and the 3rd have the same rotation and the 2nd and the last are pretty close). Also, move the first image up. You may even want to move all of them up so one or 2 of the image tops extends off the top of the page.
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Neal Chester commented:
I was trying to achieved the effect you mentioned with the ribbon, I guess it didn't stand out enough. Thanks for the feedback.
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Thanks for your feedback. Actually, the "Other ways" list, when hovered over, will show a check mark, otherwise they all will display as empty boxes. And yes, I was having trouble with the color of the links, I'll try to work out something.