Natasa S

portfolio website

By Natasa S

   on Mar 13, 2010
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  • Eric Malamisura

    Eric Malamisura

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

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    Very nice...

    Posted on Mar 13, 2010 at 10:56 PM

    I like this a lot, its almost perfect. I think the top header does waste a bit of space though, why so much spacing? And there is also a lot of spacing after the quote. I would reduce that, I think you want to try to keep as much as possible above the fold...

    • natasa S
      natasa S commented:
      Posted: on Mar 14, 2010 at 6:30 AM

      Thank you for your comment. I like the space because my eyes are resting on it. I will try on the portfolio page to remove the "quote" altogether.

  • Kirill Kedrinski

    Kirill Kedrinski

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    1 Vote
    great

    Posted on Mar 14, 2010 at 4:02 PM

    not very original i think but very usable! congrats))

  • Anastis Sourgoutsidis

    Anastis Sourgoutsidis

    Rank: 5 Advanced

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    nothing

    Posted on Mar 14, 2010 at 4:55 PM

    I like this one much better than the previous versions. Very nice.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Good start

    Posted on Mar 16, 2010 at 11:36 AM

    This is a good start but isn't quite there yet in my opinion:

    1. Remove the red gradient at the bottom
    2. Make the footer the burgundy color
    3. Align the "see our work" button to the left and give it more breathing room.
    4. Choose a thicker font for in the header.
  • Hudolf Hess

    Hudolf Hess

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

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    Excellent work

    Posted on Mar 18, 2010 at 11:26 AM

    Congratulations, no doubt, an excellent job. Clean and objective.

  • Alan Horne

    Alan Horne

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    tagline font

    Posted on Mar 18, 2010 at 11:51 AM

    I like the site, its very clean and profressional.

    Only downside for me is the font used on the tagline, not a big fan of it.

    I qould maybe also look at integrating the 3 little paragraphs into the grey footer if they are going to be on every page.

  • Haider Ali

    Haider Ali

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    need details

    Posted on Mar 20, 2010 at 7:29 AM

    Hi Natasa,

    it's a design which can attract the user's, however, it's need bit more attentions to the details. I would suggest few points:

    you have closed the header with blue color, however the rest of design is open, I think you can try removing or fading out in bottom will work

    main tagline "we handcarft.... your needs" need more detailing, perhaps try using a subtle color and type

    it's seems to me that red color is overused in your design

  • Andy E

    Andy E

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    slogan font and footer

    Posted on Mar 14, 2010 at 8:31 PM

    Good work so far. Here are a few thoughts to consider for improvement.

    • The slogan font and page title font don't match your design. I usually associate this font with an older style, typewriter-like font. I'd consider a more modern, serif font for these sections.

    • Check the alignment on the home page. The picture in the middle should stretch to the right more so the hello all text fits in the same grid as the right-most footer text.

    • The pink gradient doesn't fit well with the rest of the design. I'd consider a ground-like feature to compliment the sky in the header. This could be anything, from water, to grass, to pavement, to dirt.

  • Mateusz Staniszewski

    Mateusz Staniszewski

    Rank: 4 Master

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    nothing, looks amazing!

    Posted on Mar 15, 2010 at 11:18 AM

    Fantastic site, but can you tell it's a personal portfolio? More like a "group of people agency". Anyway it's fantastic and keep it!