Andrew Sharp

neatster

By Andrew Sharp

   on Mar 13, 2010
5 Reviews1 Vote0 Favorites251 Views

Concept Reviews

  • Julius Koroll

    Julius Koroll

    Rank: 2 Titan

    242

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    More action in the black area!

    Posted on Mar 13, 2010 at 7:41 AM

    The idea is cute, it looks clean and nice. I love your logo and I would go deeper with some cliches. I would grab myself some underwater or bubble-pictures from istock (etc) and would integrate them in die black background. Not too obvious, just 20% or less. This would give it a nice touch.

  • Christopher Koebel

    Christopher Koebel

    Rank: 7 Student

    203

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Clever use of extra space...

    Posted on Mar 13, 2010 at 10:42 AM

    Interesting way to fill the screen. I'm not really sure I would change much to be honest with you. Keep it up.

  • Matthew Nicoll

    Matthew Nicoll

    Rank: 2 Titan

    112

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    Make the black and white switch sides.

    Posted on Mar 13, 2010 at 6:07 PM

    I really like the big navigation bar and the little additional Info bits under it fit in well.

    I also like the cut out type pattern that separates the black and white.

    The design is fairly original. Great work!

  • Matt Hatfield

    Matt Hatfield

    Rank: 10 Newbie

    29

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    Move it closer to the center

    Posted on Mar 14, 2010 at 12:55 AM

    I think the large black area really pushes the white off the page. Its a good design but you might want to make it a little more even. The flow feels very solid though and the black and white really catch your eye in their own way.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

    9919

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    Really like it

    Posted on Mar 16, 2010 at 11:29 AM

    Very nicely done so far. The only thing I would change is your navigation column. I don't really like the underlined elements. Take out the underlines. Other than that, great job here!