M K

Wentros Logo

By M K

   on Mar 11, 2010
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  • Gavan Brown

    Gavan Brown

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    Strange Tag

    Posted on Mar 11, 2010 at 10:02 AM

    Not sure what "redefining creativity" means. To me redefining creativity, would be making it anything OTHER than being creative.

    W looks crooked. Tagline too close to word above. I don't mind the color you've chosen, although i'm not crazy about them

  • Aline Marques

    Aline Marques

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    Can be more explored

    Posted on Mar 11, 2010 at 10:02 AM

    I think that needs more organization: The slogan is too close the logo, I´d put some space there. The "w" can´t stay in the same aligment of the "entros"?

    I think that the logo can be more explored from this point =]

  • Miranda Sehl

    Miranda Sehl

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    tell us what you're trying to do

    Posted on Mar 11, 2010 at 11:53 AM

    okay. i looked at all your older versions, none of them tell me what your company will do and what its for. why is it called "wentros" and how are you redefining creativity? lets hear the thoughts behind what you want, and come up with a great concept! right now you're just tweeking lines in your typography.. there isn't a concept there.. thats just playing around. figure out an idea.. a theme.. make your typography reflect it. please expand your description so we can help more.

    **image found on logolounge website. they credit: "TOKY Branding+Design, The Pulitzer Foundation for the Arts" but see how the letters become water?! THAT's a concept. lets find what your's could be! :)

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  • Tony Deis

    Tony Deis

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    The W looks like an "i"

    Posted on Mar 11, 2010 at 1:36 PM

    Actually, I think the colors is the first challenge. Is that the branding you have to work with, or is it up to you?

  • Brock B.

    Brock B.

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    Change Tag Line

    Posted on Mar 11, 2010 at 3:19 PM

    I like the modern font. Tag line is very generic, looks like something you'd see on a canned template. W should loose the i accent its very confusing. Increase the W size, straighten it out, ditch the black background and lets see what it would look like on white. If it will always be used on black, then change the dark gray to a super light, almost white gray.

  • Nate Hamilton

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    Still not working

    Posted on Mar 12, 2010 at 7:50 AM

    You have to be very careful when putting certain treatments on logos. For example, the broken w look like iw and the grayed out w makes this read more like "entros". Though the meaning might be straight in your head, you clients wont get it. Keep it simple...