Jim Van Aalst

Supplier of broadcasting supplies - Webdesign

By Jim Van Aalst

   on Mar 10, 2010
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  • Alan Horne

    Alan Horne

    Rank: 3 Superior

    2952

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
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    Keywords

    Posted on Mar 10, 2010 at 4:46 AM

    You have stated the keywords on the right will be elastic, whatever that means, but if this is made in Flash, keywords won't really make much difference will it not, as search engines can't read text on flash.

    I like the design though, and really don't see much need for the use of flash myself.

    Its clean the way the client wanted.

    • Jim van Aalst
      Jim van Aalst commented:
      Posted: on Mar 10, 2010 at 4:54 AM

      Thanks for the review. The elastic means: "when the mouse comes near the keyword it attaches to the mouse like a magnet".

  • Ashim D'silva

    Ashim D'silva

    Rank: 2 Titan

    843

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    Kill the background

    Posted on Mar 10, 2010 at 6:28 AM

    I don't see the background helping dramatically, and if simple is the key here, you could do away with it. The content is well laid out and there's nice clear margins. My only other beef would be the footer. The footer's a good place for all those links, but it would be nice to categorise them, or segregate them with some headings. Will make reading through them easier.

  • Daniela Guerrato

    Daniela Guerrato

    Rank: 3 Superior

    114

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes

    A solid color background on the first half would make it 100% better.... either green, white or gray would work great!

    I would also organize "our services" on a top menu or a left sidebar nav. And make the "live registration" an action button.

    I like the footer colors and the icons! But the content could be organized in sections...

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

    9919

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    Less segmented

    Posted on Mar 10, 2010 at 9:20 AM

    This needs to be less segmented and bold. The dark black is too much, try to use more of a charcoal color. I like the footer, so just work on making the content area look less segmented.