Lynn Wallenstein

Le Roo Creative

By Lynn Wallenstein

   on Mar 08, 2010
15 Reviews3 Votes3 Favorites334 Views

Concept Reviews

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    Am I missing something...

    Posted on Mar 09, 2010 at 7:29 AM

    Am I missing something or are those the same exact photos?The actual design is good, very simple, clean and elegant. You need some text about the company and how to get a hold of them.

  • Alan Horne

    Alan Horne

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
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    Menu?

    Posted on Mar 09, 2010 at 8:29 AM

    Your going to need a menu are you not?

    I would also have some text explaining what you do, even if it just one simple sentence.

    I would also have a big call to action button, maybe saying 'fix picture now' or something.

  • Bart Van Steenput

    Bart Van Steenput

    Rank: 10 Newbie

    31

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    makek the purpose clear

    Posted on Mar 09, 2010 at 9:57 AM

    Hi, The design is nice and clean. But I really don't understand what's going on here... Where can I upload a photo? Give some more explaination.

  • diego polo

    diego polo

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    too much minimalist

    Posted on Mar 09, 2010 at 11:11 AM

    this gray.. is .. sad...

  • Creative Nuts

    Creative Nuts

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    use largeview option

    Posted on Mar 09, 2010 at 11:38 AM

    Add any jquery lightbox effect for zooming images,so visitors can view it clear.

  • Simon Eiler

    Simon Eiler

    Rank: 5 Advanced

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Love it

    Posted on Mar 09, 2010 at 11:40 AM

    I would just leave it like that, i love the simplicity of the design. The logo is very nice as wel.

  • Leigh Herbert

    Leigh Herbert

    Rank: 10 Newbie

    3

    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    Navigation or instruction

    Posted on Mar 09, 2010 at 5:19 PM

    Design is great, but I think I'd feel a little lost: I've hit this page, what next? This would make a great gallery or showcase page, but as a landing page, I think it needs something more. I'm sure that something could be very small, to keep the sleek design, but definitely something.

  • James Leahy

    James Leahy

    Rank: 4 Master

    35

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    More content, less presentation

    Posted on Mar 09, 2010 at 8:05 PM

    Pros: Simple, good title text. Cons: Too much presentation. Pictures need to be bigger. Smaller frame and border.

  • Erin Davidson

    Erin Davidson

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Too minimal

    Posted on Mar 09, 2010 at 9:38 PM

    I'm not really going to comment on the layout because I don't know what else you have planned for the website. I would assume this is an entry page that leads the viewer further into your site?

    The design itself is nice, however the angle on the lower left corner does not match the one in the upper right corner. Your frame looks wonky because of this.

    Not sure if it's just me but I see an optical illusion occuring between the 2 pics. It looks like the amount of space between the bottom of the after photo and the frame is lesser than the space between the top of the before picture and the frame. The height may be the same but it doesn't look balanced.

  • Micah

    Micah

    Rank: 7 Student

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Menu Needed

    Posted on Mar 10, 2010 at 2:59 AM

    You Need A Menu!

  • David Desquiens

    David Desquiens

    Rank: 5 Advanced

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Other photos ?

    Posted on Mar 10, 2010 at 3:15 AM

    I don't see any difference between the two photos ! May be you could add a footer and at least one action button to help people contact you

  • Frank Dobner

    Frank Dobner

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 5
    0 Votes

    attractive concept, but it needs to demonstrate the craft better with creatively different photos.

  • Anton Che

    Anton Che

    Rank: 5 Advanced

    50

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
    0 Votes
    123

    Posted on Mar 11, 2010 at 10:00 AM

    1. menu
    2. frame shade has very unusual angle, does not appeal
    3. may be a video of how this 'magical' process happens? like a tutorial

    Good luck!

  • Graham Duke

    Graham Duke

    Rank: 7 Student

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Eye Catching

    Posted on Mar 15, 2010 at 9:55 AM

    I like it, my only comments are that the logo is hard to read is that "Le roo" or "le zoo" or "le noo" also their is no indication as to what I need to do next, how do I get in touch, etc. Overall though I like the simplicity of the design

  • Adriana Vidal

    Adriana Vidal

    Rank: 10 Newbie

    46

    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    Draft

    Posted on Jun 17, 2010 at 3:36 PM

    I like it a lot.

    It's really elegant.

    I think it is way too simple and lacks of information.

    Great Job.