Peder AnzéN

Web design for Swedish Concrete Federation

By Peder AnzéN

   on Mar 08, 2010
21 Reviews15 Votes2 Favorites529 Views

Concept Reviews

  • bryanmichael

    bryanmichael

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    Almost flawless

    Posted on Mar 08, 2010 at 7:41 PM

    This is great work. Clean, fresh, superb mesh of photography with the logo and minimalistic colors. I admire how you allowed the photography to tell the story instead of what so often happens: web graphics overpower the imagery. And it's so important with a company like this who's industry is based on the true art of their work.

    Here are my only areas of improvement:

    1. While the majority of the design is nice and subtle, the Cyan dialog boxes, scroll buttons and search button at the top jump out to me like sore thumbs. Any way that you could tone down the color to a more muted version of what is picked up in their logo?

    2. The other red flag for me was the icons on the folder tabs at the bottom of the page. Lovely icons, but I don't think they fit. The main photos you use portray elegance, architectural class and sophistication; but the icons seem to cutesy and social button-y (lol - for made up words). Tweaking them to be more sophisticated and classy seems like it would help perfect the site.

    Really well done though, clean design and a fresh feel to it. Good job.

    -b

    • Peder Anzén
      Peder Anzén commented:
      Posted: on Mar 09, 2010 at 4:39 AM

      Thanks for feedback! The tab are has been a subject of discussion.

      /p

  • Thomas Tate

    Thomas Tate

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    header image

    Posted on Mar 08, 2010 at 8:21 PM

    i dont speak your language but design tends to transend that. i think if your header image doesnt match your overall design scheme there are subtle things that you can do to better incorporate it. try adding colors to your header showcase image that brings it more into line with the rest of your site. i think your on to something. really strive for a consistant balance, think overall theme and you got it.

  • Alan Horne

    Alan Horne

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    Nothing

    Posted on Mar 09, 2010 at 8:59 AM

    Personally i love this, think its great.

  • Creative Nuts

    Creative Nuts

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    add latest tweets or social media profiles

    Posted on Mar 09, 2010 at 11:34 AM

    I like design, it would be good if you show latest tweets or social media profiles.

  • Simon Eiler

    Simon Eiler

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    Two much boxes

    Posted on Mar 09, 2010 at 11:44 AM

    I kinda like the concept, but i think there are way to much different boxes, nothing is really connected to each other. Its hard to concentrate on the important things. I would also try to not use so much different colours.

  • Ashim D'silva

    Ashim D'silva

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    drop shadow fades

    Posted on Mar 10, 2010 at 6:21 AM

    I love everything about this: clean, stark, textured, fits with the images, gradients and colours are well tied as well. Small design things bug me a bit though:

    I presume the header and the footer will stretch to the edge of the window, and so I'm not a fan of the bevel. A bevel line to separate them from the body is fine, but the other 3 sides seem unnecessary.

    The drop shadows (especially the 'bloggen' tab) doesn't fade comfortably. In photoshop, there's a Quality Contour on the drop shadow - have a play with that and you'll be able to get a crisper start and a smoother fade.

    On the broader side (and this could easily be the language difference) I see a lot of different areas vying for attention and no clear winner. Might be nice to have one thing trump the hierarchy.

  • Joshua Jansen

    Joshua Jansen

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    navigation height

    Posted on Mar 10, 2010 at 8:28 AM

    I think the navigation bar would be better if it where a little bit smaller.

  • Vitor Marcellino

    Vitor Marcellino

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    Extend the banner width

    Posted on Mar 10, 2010 at 10:04 AM

    Loved the design, but I would change the banner controls, putting the arrows with the pagination buttons and add some more space between the header and the banner.

    • letty verhoeve
      letty verhoeve commented:
      Posted: on Mar 11, 2010 at 7:26 AM

      Nice design.

      Just 3 things:

      1) the cornerdilemma: choose please.

      2) the button for the Kunskapbank points in 2 directions (at least this is how i experience this) You might rethink this part of the design. 3) header with navigation in top is too heigh for my taste too

      Thats it

  • david ackermann

    david ackermann

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    multiple questions

    Posted on Mar 12, 2010 at 12:04 AM

    Pretty good idea! looks nice and catchy! :)

  • Waleed Eissa

    Waleed Eissa

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    Just two things

    Posted on Mar 12, 2010 at 12:17 AM

    This is a really great design and I love it. There are two things that need to be changed, IMO:

    • Remove the noise from the header background.
    • Make the "Branschen" tab round as the" Bloggen" tab.

    Other than this, Great job!

  • Global reloaded

    Global reloaded

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    Blue / green buttons

    Posted on Mar 12, 2010 at 7:09 AM

    Hi !

    This look great, but wehen using blue text not too visible, would be good idea using a darker blue colour.

    Regards

    Carlos

  • Rutuja Kantak

    Rutuja Kantak

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    Nice Layout

    Posted on Mar 12, 2010 at 1:32 PM

    Like the clean layout... color combination is also nice.

    Only one comment on header height.. if you reduce the height is will look better..

  • parsa fatehi

    parsa fatehi

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    design

    Posted on Mar 13, 2010 at 2:22 AM

    Nice design.

  • Julius Koroll

    Julius Koroll

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    More free elements

    Posted on Mar 13, 2010 at 7:25 AM

    The first thing I wanna say: It's a nice and wellthought design. I like your logo and the way you use the typo and icons. But I think there has to be more freedom of elements. Maybe put the switching pictures with its forward and skipbutton in one box, erase the background of the logo and menu and maybe you can make a lined-version of the switchbox, just with dotted lines, completely simple. So you have a "boxed" center of the site and the rest aligns "free" around it. I hope I did some help :)

  • stanislaw magierski

    stanislaw magierski

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    tab box, seams a little bit off bit for me

    Posted on Mar 13, 2010 at 1:13 PM

    I like the heavy header

  • natasa S

    natasa S

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    it's great

    Posted on Mar 13, 2010 at 1:26 PM

    really good

  • Edson Santoro

    Edson Santoro

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    Add more color

    Posted on Mar 15, 2010 at 2:46 AM

    Maybe a good, but not colorful backgorund. Almost everything is in gray

  • vinkal malhotra

    vinkal malhotra

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    no change

    Posted on Mar 15, 2010 at 3:56 AM

    I like design

  • Scott Gale

    Scott Gale

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    Navigation Bar Height

    Posted on Mar 08, 2010 at 7:58 AM

    I love the clean look of this design.

    The open space is great and provides some good definition. That said, here are my thoughts:

    1. The spacing between the navigation items and the login prompt, as well as the spacing between the navigation and the end of the topmost gradient box seems to be overkill in my opinion.

    2. The slideshow area, while very open, has the sense of someone just plunking it down since it does not have any container element. I like how hulu.com solves this problem with their slideshow. Because this is so free floating on this design it looks like it could use some more attention.

    3. Rounded corners theme: for some containers you have rounded corners, for some you have square corners, this might be intentional, but I would try to keep a consistent theme.

    Overall great design.

    • Peder Anzén
      Peder Anzén commented:
      Posted: on Mar 08, 2010 at 8:17 AM

      Thanks for your feedback - very objective! I will take that to the next version.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Great work!

    Posted on Mar 08, 2010 at 8:26 AM

    I really like this quite a bit. The only thing I'm not a huge fan of is the way the image doesn't line up with the edges of the design. Otherwise, good work here!

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Mar 14, 2010 at 9:53 PM

      I agree with the full width image comment from Nate, the 'previous' and 'next' buttons can be overlayed with subtle opacity or appear on hover to give the image more space and widen its stage to perform as they are strong product based images

  • Andy E

    Andy E

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    tab colors

    Posted on Mar 08, 2010 at 12:15 PM

    This looks good! It's clean, well structured, and has some nice graphics. I have just 2 comments to consider for improvement: 1) stretch the photo to fill the space and incorporate the slideshow controls over the image and 2) change the color of the inactive tabs to better differentiate them from the active tab.

    • bryanmichael
      bryanmichael commented:
      Posted: on Mar 08, 2010 at 7:31 PM

      good point on the inactive tabs. i'm personally okay with the photo not stretching to fill the space - it creates interest and white space.

      -b