Pubforce: Landing Page

The grey area dividing the page is too tall, should be a little thinner. The small text about the reduce price is a major selling point and should be featured in the copy. Use a carousel or tabs for the info on the bottom right of the page, i.e. Screenshots.

I like this design, I would not change much apart from the images on the right hand side in the header. I would see what it looks like less transparent. I would also consider bringing on top of the grey bar.

In my opinion this is a great looking design. So I would like to start off with that. One thing I would just point out is, for people using netbooks and smaller vertical height screens, be sure you sneak those two primary action items into that viewable area.

Also, I don't think the scrolling is that bad, but I would mention that if there was some way of controlling / limiting the users necessity to scroll through all that info that would help your cause (w/r/t your user base), instead of looking like a brochure. Seems like you could do most of that content with a couple quick buttons that swap it around. This would help tighten up the content area below the silver bar as well.

Hope this helps, overall nice and clean.

Here's just some thoughts in no particular order:

1. the logo needs some more emphasis-also the top left of the screen is rather empty

2. I think you're trying to squeeze too much text in too little space in the green area

3. The "View Demo" and "buy now" buttons have way too much shadow beneath them. Maybe you could also try having more of an indented text look

4. You need to add some more vertical padding to the main content area and add some more padding to the sidebar.

5. You might want to come up with a better footer. Use your footer to get your visitor to stay on your site longer by clicking links to others parts of your site.

6. I think you should reduce the amount of gradient on the grey bar separating the green and white sections of the site.

Um....everything else looks fine.

i love it, great who, what, where, when, why. the only thing i would say is making pubforce more branded and present. great work again.

I would get rid of the images that are behind the main image, no real need for them.

Other than that the design is good. Personally im not a fan of Olive Green used that much, but thats just me, not a bad thing for the site.

The grey bar where you got "View Demo" and "Buy Now" i would try to do that thinner. And i would delet that transparent screenshot behind the actual screenshot.

Is a pub owner going to know what "customizable design elements' means.

Also, design is nice but feels too 'slick' for a pub. Instead of solid gradients and shadows, have you tried textures or a worn look?

Site looks good with strong Call-to-Action buttons but the main promo image of the screen shot is not selling the service or representative of the overall site design.

Is there a better screen shot or design you could use? The feeling I get is that you put a lot of time into your own website design but the service one isn't as engaging.

Just my 2cents. Good job

The whole thing sits really nicely and is immediately impressive. I'd squeeze some more size out of the screenshot at the expense of pushing stuff lower because that's a good majority of your sale right there. Features are well and good but nothing like the final product to make the sale.

Also, the watermark/faded screenie really isn't adding anything.

It's a great landing page. But I would get rid of the transparent images on the right hand side like it has mentioned before.

I would also display the price of the template next to the Buy Now button.

Instead of easy to use, you should mention antoher outstanding feature of your template. As everbody writes easy to use and I don't take a statement like this serious anymore. I click the demo to see for myself if it's easy to use.

I prefer the sizing of the first one better (text/image). The second one is definitely a little bit crowded, and lose the transparent bit of the image in the background... it's a bit distracting.

It's very nice. Bravo !

This is a great site, well designed and nicely formatted. However, I don't really understand where this is going. Is it going to be it's own dedicated site, or is it going to be tied in with your theme site? How are people going to get to it and are they going to understand it all once t hey get to it. Should there be a logo in the left hand corner?